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Alora stepped towards Nokrt again, her hand retrieving the lead after un-clipping it from the collar. She draped it around his neck, her hand then caressing his face.

 

"Maybe... teach her the basics Nokrt and I'll train her in the ... finer arts later."

 

Alora felt the need to find her other ... lost ... apprentice. She headed into the shower, quickly rinsing herself off, drying and dressing in a more... practical outfit, black of course. Tunic and pants, her thigh high boots, topped with her robes. The material wasn't heavy, being that she was about to head to a desert planet. Coming out of the bathroom, she guided a now dressed Nokrt out into the hanger.

 

"I've another apprentice to go retrieve. Keep an eye on Leo for me... and have fun with the girl while I'm gone..."

 

She gave him a wink, her tinkling laughter ringing out in the hanger bay as he departed her ship. Heading back in to her cockpit, Alora warmed up her ship, running through the preflight checks while her droid continued with it's duties. She soon lifted off, heading towards where she had heard her other apprentice to be... Tattooine.

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"Of course my mistress..." Nokrt called to the empty hangar. He turned about and made his way to a Front Desk where none other than Jennifer Kenobi had reappeared.

 

"So Jen, you have returned I take it. Do you wish to continue instruction in the Dark Arts?"

 

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Meanwhile the remaining Seven Vornskr's emerged in the forest in front of Leo, each with the intention of making ure he would be the next target of their feasting. Two of them, possibly the contenders for Alpha Males, had come forward their poison tail whips aimed high. They pounced and one of the tails swiped Leo across the arm. The one who had done it had ran up itno the tree above and waited for Leo to come after him.

 

Another Vornskr emerged from the brush and leaped upon Leo's back diving his face into his back. The blood was a magnificent taste to these beasts and they each eetched toward him awaitng for his corpse to fall to the ground.

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The Sundered Heart returned from it's starting point, Alora setting the ship down in the hanger in which she had left. After the post flight checks, she left the cockpit, heading back to where her apprentice was. During the flight she had fed her apprentice, made sure he was well rested. He still had the choice of placing on the sith apprentice robes if he so desired.

 

"There is a task for you... if you choose to become my apprentice formally. I have another apprentice out in the forest. He's being attacked by creatures. I'd like you to go assist him. There is a catch. Both of you must bring back a live creature... each. It doesn't have to be the same kind that are attacking him now either. Just as long as you both bring back a creature from the forest."

 

She impressed on him the force sense of her other apprentice, Leo, so that he would be able to find him.

 

"I leave this challenge up to you if you choose to accept it or not. The other catch is that you take no weapons with you and use nothing but the force and your wits to complete this task."

 

Alora sat back in one of the easy chairs in the living room of her ship, watching Talrin closely to see what he wished to do. If he chose to do this task he was free to leave to her other apprentice's assistance immediately.

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Nokrt looked coldly too her and then a vision surrounded them, a frozen wasteland with snow and ice as far as one could see. Th illusion was superb and Nokrt would not be telling Jen of what he had done hoping the effect upon her mind would be real.

 

"This is Csilla, my homeland, it is a harsh world on the surface but one can learn to love it. There is a trial every Chiss goes through to complete their livelyhood upon its surface."

 

He came in and whispered in her ear the Chiss way of things.

 

((We are gonna do this over PM so check your pm box and we will RP through there))

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After about 15 minutes in the cell Darson became very ticked off. He looked at his brother and asked

 

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This will be a warning issued this time for both parties, with subsequent breaches punishable by dismemberment by a horde of frenzied Ewoks.

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((WRONG MOVE))

 

The Imperial Stormtroopers ordered to guard the two Ewooks had certainly been caught by surprise when they pulled the thermite charges out of their..wherevers. Perhaps a Full Body Cavity search was necessary. Regardless, they acted with precision and in an instant shot two blaster bolts at the creatures feet blowing them clear off into nothing but ashed vapors.

 

"Thought you could get away did you, you mindless scum!"

 

The nearest stormtrooper came over and kicked Darson in the face causing the bone is his nose to fracture and bleed down the side of his face.

 

"You were lucky we didn't put you in a force cell but now we have more interesting methods in mind."

 

4 stormtroopers converged on the now legless Ewooks and took them down to a dungeon like area under the Academy. They held them up on a joist by their arms and placed a few droids in the room after cavity searching each of them, taking every prized possession off of them. The Ewooks had been stripped bare.

 

"Enjoy, and let us know when you have had enough."

 

A droid nearby started a small flame and etched ever closer to the ewooks catching their thick hair aflame.

 

((You are not dead but you still have a chance at life))

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((OK first thing I did not want him to do this but whatever))

 

The asbestos lining of his fur protecting him from the flame for a short period of time, Bosutai knew they were screwed.

 

"Darson! YOU F****** IDIOT! WHen dealing with the imperials do not try to escape as we will die!"

 

Trying to use diplomacy instead of stupidity he called out hoping Nokrt could hear him, and if he couldn't there was gonna be roast ewook on the menu.

 

"Hello Nokrt I came here to find work, but it seems that stupidity has throw the proverbail hydrospanner in the hyperdrive. I did not wish to enter into combat with you troopers it was my brothers stupidity that caused the conflict. I wish to work for you as I know you to be an enterprising person. If there is any way we can work something out please let me know."

 

Most likely no one was listenin, but as he was strung up with his feet shot off. Also the flames were startign to hurt a lot more then they had. The asbestos was burned through and his hair was just about to catch fire.

 

((Please don't kill us!))

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A Lieutenant came down the stairs and looked to Bosutai.

 

"You may live."

 

He did not lower the Ewook who spoke against his brothers actions but instead lit Darson aflame and made Bosutai watch his brother burn practically to death. After such they lowered him and escorted him out of the room to Nokrt's Lieutenant's room and knocked. When the door opened he was ushered in.

 

"So, what are you doing at this base Ewook?" said Lieutenant Xavier while eating a Spanish Olive he had just taken out of his Vodka Martini.

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"well commander I wish some form of permanent employment. I have grown bored with limited time employment. I seek permanent employment in which I can relieve some of the boredom and earn some cold hard credits."

 

A little woozy from the flames, Bosutai sat down on a nearby stool.

 

"and I would really apreciate if you put Darson in a bacta tank. I do use him you know."

 

Sneezing, Bosutai looked at the commander with a leveled gaze and spoke frankly.

 

"I do not care if you want me to kill or to die i just wish work. Work is what I live for."

 

((Nokrt!!! you F****** god moded Darson specifically said a blinding flash and a concussive shockwave, yet your stormtroopers were unnaffected. you totally cheated right there as they were unconscious!))

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((He is not dead. And that blinding flash would only do so much. The Stormtrooper who stand guard had no vision of the blast and therefore were unaffected by your little blast. Darson is alive but right now he is in considerable pain until he admits defeat.))

 

The Lieutenant looked to the Ewook who seemed to be a bit confused.

 

"I am not a Commander, my commander is a Commander but I am not a Commander. However, there is some work you could have done for the Empire. There are a few outposts that need supplies delivered to them. I have granted you access to the rations center but you will be supervised at all times. Understood?"

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((OK dipstick, learn basic Imperial Protocols. Stormtroopers stand on the perimeter on the outside of the Jail. An explosion happens they are out of range of you blast you are captured.

 

Also:

 

4 stormtroopers converged on the now legless Ewooks and took them down to a dungeon like area under the Academy. They held them up on a joist by their arms and placed a few droids in the room after cavity searching each of them, taking every prized possession off of them. The Ewooks had been stripped bare.

 

You have nothing on you. You are a hopeless defenseless little Ewook. Now you are tied up and helpless ya little sheiza for brains. You are lucky I don't blast your face of right now with a flechette.))

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"I understand then sir. I will take this mission on and I say could you have come up with something a little more ... hmm interesting? OH well I shall take on this mission and plaese don't kill stupid in the meantime. He is rather useful at some times."

 

Getting up from the chair and bowing down, Bosutai fell over. He had forgotten the fact that he was without legs.

 

"Might I ask you for some help say about a week in a bacta tank to get these legs regenerated or if not some cybernetic new ones? And if you aren't well then I'm afraid I won't be much use to you without any legs."

 

 

((Sorry Nokrt I was just doing a favor for stupid and he said that you were cheating so I didn't bother to check up on it since my friend is sometimes smart, and one other thing, we would have fired back at the stormtroopers wouldn't have we?))

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((With the weapons we allowed you to have in a jail cell? As if... And it would be inconsequential and entire battalion of Stormtroopers lie in the confines of this base. You are better off now, fighting would have led to much worse torture.))

 

Lieutenant Xavier looked to Bosutai in regard. The stormtroopers had effectively disabled them without killing them of course but Cybernetic leg replacements were a good option. The Ewook knew nothing of Bacta as it canot regenerate limbs and the cybernetics would be more useful.

 

"I will have a few troopers take you down to medical. You will have some cybernetic legs done which I will have ready to be placed on you immediately."

 

The legs were nothing more than elegant looking brass encasing around a durasteel frame. No room for modification.

 

Two troopers entered the room and lifted the Ewook and took him down to medical where the short procedure took place and the creature was made with the two new shiny legs.

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((just palin ordinary durasteel? ok those are gonna have to go. Mental note get them replaced with my own design.))

 

Loking down at his legs he noticed the layout right away. There were no rooms for modificatios and they were fitted to be removeable. they were going into storage as soon as he could get some new ones to replace them.

 

"ok liutenant Im eady for my job, what outposts am I going to today?"

 

((sorry for the short post I'm tired will edit more later ))

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"All of them" said the Lieutenant over his comm.

 

It was amusing, the little bugger would think the small attachments on his legs would be removable as Lieutenant Xavier had them as such when put on. But they were more than such, He had the great doctor's fuse the metal to the bone. It would never come off.

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((you ass why do you have to be so mean to me!?))

 

Walking to the supply depo he qickly picked up a dispatch record that showed what was going where. He studied it and found he would be jumping so many places he would have no time to have the legs removed and new ones put on.

 

"ok liutenat as soon as these have been loaded on my ship in orbit I'll be on my way."

 

 

((you do know after this job I'll have them removed and new ones put on))

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The Lieutenant was highly puzzled at this man's response. A simple Transport across the surface of Carida would more than suffice for this trip. He became worrisome about this Ewook's intention and had certain preparations made to make sure if the creature tried to make of with Imperial Goods he would incinerate.

 

"Then get on with it Bosutai, I haven't all day to wonder where a low life like yourself is on my planet."

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Once in the temple, Det searched out a secluded room to make his temporary workshop and quarters. Through the Force, he moved a table toward the corner of the room and a couple of chairs along with it. He then placed his parts upon the table and neatly arranged them. He placed the two crimson crystals on the table also. He reached within the Force ”“ the parts moved carefully from separate pieces to one form around a crystal ”“ until they were joined together and melded into one with the crystal within to form a beautiful golden hilt. The new device floated into Det's right hand. Upon contact, Det inspected the new weapon, and then hit the ignition button. A bright red light filled the room as the saber's crimson blade shot out nearly one meter from the hilt. Det smiled as he swung the new weapon around. As he focused within the Force, a chair lifted off the ground and flew towards Det ”“ who dodged it and swung the saber ”“ the chair fell to the ground; it's back fell 3 meters further ”“ both bearing the scar of a saber cut.

 

”œExcellent,”

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Nokrt felt the presence of Det's completion of his lightsaber, his glory in himself was at a rise and Nokrt invariably was proud. He removed himself from Jen, her training was slow but it would progress surely, it would take a bit more of a beating though on her part.

 

"I will be back for you in a moment Jennifer, stay here and focus on centering the force around you feel the room, the academy, the planet."

 

The Sith Lord swept out of the room and found the room Det was in. But he did not open it.

 

Perhaps a bit of fun wouldn't harm him so much.

 

Inside the room, where sleeping Det was, Nokrt used his now exercised power over replication and created a few different men inside the room. One was Dark Lord Dagon, then he had himself along with Draken Shadowlord, Alora, and a few more sith appear with him surrounding Det's bed.

 

Nokrt was immersed now and needed no further inclination to wake his dosing apprentice. He grabbed him with the force waking him in an instant. And then he began to speak but not through his own mouth but those of his replications.

 

"Det Juzaka, you have proved yourself a powerful Sith" said the mock Alora cooing to Det as he remained suspended in midair.

 

"And now the time has come for you to face your final task." echoed the voice of Draken Shadowlord.

 

"Your trials have begun." said the chilling voice of Dagon.

 

The replicated Nokrt smiled and went to his belt activating his light saber and as he swung an arch overhead he vanished and the True Nokrt came bursting through the door throwing out an enormous amount of force energy toward Det blasting him through the wall out into the sandy Caridian beach.

 

Nokrt flashed his lighsaber into his Form IV position carrying his lightsaber in both hands wielding it like a crafty Katana.

 

"The time for mistakes are over Det, you must now face your destiny in the true manner of the Sith, you must destroy me to ascend in the ranks of the Sith, or be destroyed."

 

The taunt was done and the duel had begun, his final test was at hand. Nokrt only hoped he was ready for the pain he was about to receive from his master.

 

((Remember this will be your first experience with a Lightsaber. I therefore am extending this duel to allow Det to learn his Form in with his Lightsaber. I will let you know when we have battled long enough.

 

 

Your move.))

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Feeling the Dark Side rushing through him was like a drug. It power was addicting and the strength it gave him was far more powerful than anything he had felt before. His anger gave it power, his pain surged him forward. His senses were sharper than ever, and his body felt stronger than he could have hoped for. He was more than human. He was a machine designed for destruction.

 

When he first felt the vornskers tail slice through his arm, he thought of it as nothing more than another wound. More pain to add to his rage. But then he felt something within him. The tails of the vornskers held a poison strong enough to immobilize him. And if that happened he would be nothing more than food for these monsters. That thought had barely registered before he felt himself being pushed to the ground by an attack from behind.

 

Now I am getting aggrevated.

 

Rolling to the side, Leo rose to his feet and confronted the six vornskers before him. His eyes no longer held the red and yellow markings often seen on the Sith. They were pure red. The crimson color that only belonged to the Chiss of the Unknown Region. Stretching out his hands he felt the Force emerging from his fingertips. He could feel the bodies of the vornskers within his grasp and without warning, he clenched his fists together. Through the Force he felt their hearts stop beating and their ribs snap. He had crushed their bodies with but a thought. Now only one remained.

 

"You are mine."

 

Turning to face the treeline, Darth Trucido made eye contact with the beast. He knew he needed this one alive. Then as if in slow motion, the tree limb beneath the vornsker snapped and the beast fell to the ground. Striding towards the fallen creature, the Sith apprentice landed a well placed kick to the back of the vornskers head, rendering it unconscious. Gripping the beast by the fur on its neck, he began the long slow process of bringing it back to the Temple. After several minutes of walking, Darth Trucido arrived at the Temple.

 

Brushing past the medical droid, the young Sith emerged before Alora a bloodied mess. His tunic and robes were torn in several places. Blood flowed freely from mutliple wounds on his back, a gash along his face, and torn leg. His emerald eyes gazed upon her before dropping to a knee. His hatred of her long gone. He had realized the purpose of this assignment. He had embraced his connection to the Dark Side fully. He no longer had to hold back his emotions. And one could only do that in the proximity of death.

 

"I am yours to command, my Mistress."

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Det was sound asleep when he heard noises from within. It sounded like footsteps walking around as if he was being surrounded by several beings. Then the presence of several entities was sensed ”“ could they be? They were surrounding him and ready to attack. He did recognize a couple as legendary Sith lords ”“ but what were they doing here? Could it be we have renegades ”“ but then he realized ”“ was something afoot? He then realized this wasn't a dream ”“ but yet they didn't seem real ”“ these Sith lords were illusions. Det looked around and felt cringes in his throat. He was being levitated!

 

"Det Juzaka, you have proved yourself a powerful Sith" spoke one of the lords ”“ who Det soon recognized to be Alora.

 

Another then spoke, ”œAnd now the time has come for you to face your final task.

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((Too much back posting try to do some more original work, talk a bit about how swinging a lightsaber is so terribly different from a sword due to the weightless blade. The maneuver you made would have killed you as you are untrained with a saber.))

 

Det made at him like a maniac not really sure of what he was doing it looked like. To Nokrt, it reminded him of a rancor who just had his foot stepped on. The Chiss smiled and began to make his dance-like saber form playing around with his apprentice for a bit allowing him to make a sort of advance. The blade of his apprentice made its way into the cloak of his master taking a corner out of it but it was not severe enough to worry about.

 

His apprentice tried to mock his master by going from behind him and taking Nokrt out right then and there, but it was a useless gesture the Sith Lord merely used his power of teleportation to go behind Det and then hoisted him into the air smiling in his quick victory.

 

"You can do better."

 

He tossed his apprentice into the air and using his limitless power the Chiss made a copy of himself appear over Det smashing him in the torso and knocking him down into the Sea below. Nokrt was already there when he landed, his blade now exiting his Form IV and entering Form II. He swung toward his apprentice, not making anything lethal yet, but came extremely close to slicing him to bits.

 

"Do not hold back Det! Show me your power!"

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Det could feel the heat from his master's blade as it whipped right by him several times, he attempted to parry it with his own, but he felt like he was blocking air. Not much weight behind his parries. He then felt the heat and the pain as his master's blade seared the side of his upper left arm. He flipped his saber to knock the blade away, but nearly lost it in the attempt. He gathered his senses, jumped backward away from his master and focused within the Force. Elegant indeed ”“ the lightsaber is much lighter than a standard sword, Det thought. He didn't have much time. He sensed the presence of two people. One was directly behind him. He turned around to find his master flip his blade around, nearly slicing Det in half, but was caught by Det's blade. Another blade came in from the other side at Det's neck. Within a split second, Det had blocked it with a blade that came out the opposite end of his hilt. No time to think; must move quick. He jumped up and performed a split kick to knock the phantoms away and turned around to parry a third blade coming in with lightning speed. That parry was followed by a quick jab into that attacker's gullet. The attacker disappeared into a burst of light ”“ another phantom!

 

Det looked through the Force and saw that he was to understand that his master was wearing him down. His strength would be his undoing. He also realized that he didn't need to forcibly whip his saber around with such brute strength. Let the Force guide you.

 

Only two seconds later, he was fending off dual attacks from copies of his master when another shadow came in moving with such speed that Det did not see. The speed exhibited by this shadow tossed Det so off guard that the shadow managed to nearly cut off Det's left arm, but he left a large gash in the side of it. Det screamed with anger and rolled backwards away from the armada. The phantoms and the shadow followed him, but Det was unaware. He then was busy fighting off saber strikes with his blade despite the pain. He channeled the pain and his anger and used the Force to blast the shadow back into the temple wall. The wall collapsed under pressure from the impact. He then saw the phantoms approaching from the other side and whipped around. His movement became more fluent as he did. He then whipped his blade out of his hand toward a phantom and it flew right through the middle of it, never deactivating. The phantom exploded into a ray of light. The other phantom was nearly within striking distance of an unarmed Det and moved in for the kill, but was met by a smaller blade extruding from Det's left hand, right into the gullet ((The dagger)). Not at a price though, the phantom managed to take a good slice out of Det's left hip. Det raised his right hand and the Force carried his lightsaber back to him. As it reached his hand, it was knocked away by a rock that struck Det's hand. Det then rolled to the right to dodge a slice by another shadow. He again called for his saber and it floated toward him. This time it reached his hand, and the blade extended. He was aware of the shadow's presence as he turned toward it and blocked a blade swing. The blades locked together and Det was staring straight into the glaring red eyes of a Chiss who was his master.

 

((OOC: perhaps not the best, but better?))

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((A bit too much God modding but tolerable. Very good indeed. Your creativity is improving here.))

 

"You have learned much Det Juzaka, but you are holding back against me. Throw aside your fondness of your master, I am now your obstacle to your success."

 

The Chiss wasted little time after locking his blades in with Det before he made a quick stomp at his shins before continuing his elegant swipes at his master. His mother had taught him well in this regard, her Form derived from the great Makashi master Count Dooku, and thus now his. He moved with grace and made quick swipes at his apprentice making sure he knew his place.

 

The water was cool and Nokrt was tired of his being wet. And launched Det out of the water followed by himself and when he started on the ground the Chiss showed no sign of remorse. His apprentice had now caused him physical harm in the sea below and he would dearly pay for such a thing. He had become to comfortable in his place.

 

Nokrt held his blue palm out and his Red eyes flashed in malice. He focused his energies upon his Apprentice making another illusion, but this time in his mind.

 

The scene was dark damp and very maniacal in its aura. The dark energies could be found sweeping the room and Det laid there, stuck to a table, unable to rid himself of his capture. Beside him stood many droids each with various needles, each prodding and stabbing him in turn. Some were drawing blood and others were poking to administer poisons and serum to cause Det maximum inflict of pain.

 

Above the Sith Apprentice an opaque vision of his master appeared in an echoed sort of manner.

 

"Det, you have caused me harm, you will pay for your insubordination!" called the Chiss ending his banter in a psychotic laughter.

 

The vision started to repeat, the laughter echoed form 10 locations before the vision faded away.

 

Nokrt was standing on top of a spire of the Imperial Academy and was looking down at the beach where Det laid, formerly writhing in pain.

 

"Come Det show me your hatred! Give in to your feelings!"

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Having followed her other apprentice's progress, Alora turned to Talrin before Leo returned.

 

"Looks like you are too late to assist Leonardo. Your task has now changed. You are to go out into the forest and find your own beast. You will face the same dangers as he has faced. As I said before, you will take no weapons with you. Go. Now."

 

Noticing the saber she had given to him previously, she removed it from him with the Force.

 

"You won't get this one back. You will be making one of your own when the time comes. If you have any other weapons on you, give them to one of the servants to put in your assigned room."

 

She dismissed Talrin to his task and headed into the Temple where she stopped and waited for Leo to arrive back. When he did, she observed him both through the Force and visually as she took in the damage he had taken. She sensed that the task had done it's own job, feeling his connection to the Darkside having grown stronger.

 

"You may rise Leo. Your beast will be caged until a later task. Your connection to the Darkside is much stronger, and will only grow stronger from here on in. Go and get patched up. You have done well."

 

Her pride at his accomplishment was evident as she stepped closer to him, her finger tracing his jawline to beneath his chin before she tilted his face up towards her.

 

"You have been assigned a room in the Temple. Once you leave the medic's, you will find your sith robes in the chest at the foot of the bed."

 

Her voice had taken on a softer note than before, more... friendly.

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Struggling”¦

 

Det lay in the sand and struggled as if something was maiming him. Suddenly a big rush of Force emerged from him and pushed objects and sand into nearby walls ”“ damaging them. A dust cloud then loomed over the beach, blocking full view of the beach head below. As the dust cleared and settled, the resulting beach head revealed no sign of Det.

 

Det kept his whereabouts to himself ”“ as he made his way along the path he chose. His anger further fueled by the searing pain his body was feeling. He had one mission left: as did the legendary Darth Sidious as the apprentice to Plagueis. In order to become, he had to eliminate the obstacle in his way.

 

Upon the spire, Nokrt was looking around for his apprentice, but he couldn't find him anywhere. The Chiss looked to within the Force to try to locate Det, but there was something wrong. Did he leave the planet? Impossible! Why would he do such a thing that coward! He looked around again, and then found himself falling off the spire as a result of a large explosion. He landed hard against the beach head. Nokrt shook off the cobwebs from the fall and looked upward to find himself on the ground, but not a second later, a crimson blade whipped down toward him, which he barely blocked with his own. He found himself in another lock with Det.

 

”œCoward am I?”

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((No. That is pure God modding. You not only posted my actions but my thoughts. This is, in other words, cheating. Though I will play along but you will not like what you find.))

 

The Chiss had clearly had his hands tied with his apprentice but his apprentice was the only fool here to be seen. Dueling with an illusion while Nokrt watched from afar playing the puppeteer was quite amusing to him. Det was so convinced in his mock of himself was himself that he rushed forward even shouted at it like it was his master.

 

The young man had much to learn, but he has certainly proved his worth in Nokrt's eyes. It was time to end this quickly and decisively. The Chiss ended his apparition it vanishing before Det's eyes and the Sith Lord launched out of his hiding place about 50 feet from his apprentice and slammed his foot into his back driving him into the ground and shortly the Chiss grabbed his arm, twisting and breaking it. The man was now of no harm to the Chiss Lord.

 

"Very good, very good Det, you have done well, but now you need to heal."

 

The Chiss tabbed him in his back with a metal rod, giving him a Spinal Tap sort of technique which paralyzed him from below his shoulder blades on down. It had a bit of a sleeping poison and soon the apprentice fell in sleep and Nokrt lifted him and took him to the Medical Wing.

 

Surgery was short as the Medical Droids replaced the missing bone from Det's arm and Spinal Cord with enhanced Durasteel, interlaced with Cortosis. It would not be externally visible and would add great power to his apprentice's anatomical structure while he existed in this body.

 

Nokrt went back to his room and meditated and awaited Det to wake from his induced sleep.

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Resident Tech and Video Game Geek

 

Well, crap, Sasori is correct.
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