Limericks

[Artemia]

Well written...but at the same time the imagery...not a big fan.

 

But emotionally charging, and well-written as always.

[Ary the Grey]

I'm a fan of dark writing. Sometimes I like hopeful stuff, but if it's going to be heavy, dark stuff is heavier, and I tend towards it.

 

 

To everyone that's been following, take that as a disclaimer. If you want bright happy stuff, you should give me a bright, happy subject to write a limerick on. =P

[Artemia]

I'm a fan of dark writing. Sometimes I like hopeful stuff, but if it's going to be heavy, dark stuff is heavier, and I tend towards it.

 

 

To everyone that's been following, take that as a disclaimer. If you want bright happy stuff, you should give me a bright, happy subject to write a limerick on. =P

 

If everything you wrote was bright and cheerful, I'd be worried. Normally, I'm a fan of dark...but that one did strike a chord.

 

Keep on with the dark and brooding, and I'll stick with my intensity and cliffhangers.

[Sith X]

How about one about the character Aryian Darkfire?

[Ary the Grey]

A man tried to protect the weak.

And so, life's answers he did seek.

But yet, day by day,

He slowly turned Grey.

And came away humbled and meek.

[Artemia]

You wouldn't think you could pull off a defined tone and style with a mere five lines, but you do so wonderfully.

 

 

Throwing in a theme: *poke*

[Ary the Grey]

Some people, they like to smoke,

Erasing their stress with a toke.

But you get more use

From physical abuse.

And that's what I think of your poke.

[NavyGal]

Hmm I propose the theme: Winnie the Pooh

 

You can do it as tomorrow's limerick if you wish I have no objection...

[Ary the Grey]

He's a bear who cares not for money,

And when he's hungry it's not funny,

Chris Robinson

Better think again

If he thinks he can hide the hunny.

 

And though pooh-bear is quite lazy,

When he's hungry his vision gets hazy,

On the ground Chris got sprawled,

As his face Winnie mauled,

As no hunny makes pooh-bear go crazy.

 

[Artemia]

Chris Robinson?

 

Eh?

 

Try Christopher Robin. Or some version thereof.

 

Come on baby, it's a children's story...get it right.

[Ary the Grey]

Oh. Thought that sounded weird. I'll rewrite another.

 

 

I already have a challenge topic from a friend for tomorrow: chuck norris.

 

 

EDIT:

 

He's a bear who cares not for money,

And when he's hungry it's not funny,

Christopher Robin

Better start hustlin'

If he thinks he can hide the hunny.

 

 

 

 

 

It blows. Lol. I blame the fact I'm listening to Eminem while writing.

[Ary the Grey]

The stars were aligned to the taurus,

As the angels sang out in their chorus.

All of Vietnam

Started losing their calm,

As a woman gave birth to Chuck Norris.

[Sasori]

LOLZ! That's amazing, I like the nice tie to Vietnam.

[Ary the Grey]

The stars were aligned to the taurus,

As the angels sang out in their chorus.

All of Vietnam

Started losing their calm,

As a woman gave birth to Chuck Norris.

 

 

Alternatively:

 

 

The North Vietnamese

Would fall to their knees

At the epic birth of Chuck Norris

[Sasori]

I like the original better, but both are well done.

[handofthrawn]

Don't mind if I join in here. A couple I wrote:

 

A Death Star the Emperor did own,

From credits he got on a loan.

The bank was dismayed,

He never repaid,

As he was--quite literally--overthrown.

 

There once was a man of great fame,

Whose face did get hit by a train.

"I'm sorry he's dead,"

The engineer said,

"But it's his big head that's to blame."

[Ary the Grey]

Not at all, go for it. I still have to write two for today to make up for yesterday...and I'm going to be pretty busy today. =(

[Sasori]

Seems like you have been busy buddy. Can I haz moar Limericks?