NavyGal

Ooohhh thought it probably wasn't rey but had to ask.

Squeeeeeee!!!!! Excited!!!!! I enjoyed this. Who is the little rescued prisoner? Rey?

I think it is worth it for the editing and such. If you don't do it either now or later you will regret it.

I'm really hoping I can get some inside info on this in a few weeks.... hehehehe....

So excited!!! Intriguing start. Can't wait for more.

Yup... And it could almost create spin offs with some of the thoughts I have had from the twist.... *giggles maniacally*

Awww as long as you try How is skating going?

We want more! We want more! We want more! We want more! /chant Dearest Mythie, we miss your stories. Love, the psycho padawans.

Definitely going to agree that is was a fun read. I liked how you ended it

Oh I really liked that. I guess that Aeva slapped Zae, because she thought she had something to do with it going wrong somehow and that she stole her man? I think her panic after what happened was very believable, especially as she was mentally preparing herself for not getting him and then suddenly BAM! She has him!

TEEEEEELLLLL HIIIIIIIIIM! I don't like Aeva... just saying. MOAR!

Awwwwww! I kinda wanna slap her and just yell HE LOVE YOU STUPID! But I can't because I get why she thinks what she does. I liked this... only complaint is it's too short MOAR!

I agree with Courtney on this one. We don't need multitudes of back story for this. If we had that then it would just get boring. I think this does well as it is. I don't even particularly mind not having descriptions of the characters. It lets me create my own characters in my head.

I like this! I feel like I have read it before for some reason but I don't know how that could be at all possible. Either way I like it! MOOOOOOOOOORRRREEE! Please?

MOAR! I DEMAND MOAR!!!!! I just cracked up laughing all over again whilst rereading this! It will never get less funny!