Sasori Posted January 11, 2009 Share Posted January 11, 2009 (edited) As a word of warning, my poems are not edited, looked over or even thought about after being written. I write them in the moment of emotion and if I have the temptation or notion to look over it and make sure it was good, or even have a thought it was not what I was trying to portray, I destroy it. You have been warned. Spontaneity is prone here. I will begin posting poems here throughout the year. As of now, nothing has come to mind, so check back for updates. Poem Links: A Fix Love Smells Like Poo Vacation For You, Sorrow For Me Tale of a Heart Edited May 24, 2010 by Guest Resident Tech and Video Game Geek Well, crap, Sasori is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NavyGal Posted January 12, 2009 Share Posted January 12, 2009 How about you just rename the title of your other thread and continue posting poems in there rather than creating a new thread when you don't have any poems for it yet? And that way you will be able to keep everything in the one thread? Just a thought. But I look forward to reading more. looking forward to tit One flash of my perfect chest and he'll be knocked out in a happytime daydream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sasori Posted January 12, 2009 Author Share Posted January 12, 2009 I didn't think about that, Plus it was linked for Fan Fic awards so I wanted to keep it separate as not to mess that up. A Fix Two years ago i was impressed The newest, the best Was but a long thought lie It seemed very nice at first glance, Flashy, friendly, a new age accomplishment And then it became a nuisance Warning, wanting, needing permission I did not want to deal with this abomination I trusted I had no where else to turn. I could not go back, to two years before, or else I would lose what I have done in this time. Every memory I saved, every capture I needed was waiting right here for my access I weened and I waned, looking at every other option but truth be told, I had been trapped by the system I dealt with the horrifying lie which annoyed me and warned me and would not let me be It drove me crazy all the things it did Until I damned its name every day it was there still And then it came like a shining star a replacement a new one to fix the crap we handed out before I was gleaming, it was here what I had waited for two years ago It was flashy but simple not asking me for permission no warnings except the first time and no red tape to read through I happily embrace when you are truly here so all people in the world can rejoice with me too and all I can say is "Vista, I don't need you" Resident Tech and Video Game Geek Well, crap, Sasori is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NavyGal Posted January 12, 2009 Share Posted January 12, 2009 Fair enough... I do think you can link to individual posts though... Maybe just put a link to that thread in the first post here... just so people can reference all your poems? And I was trying to work out what that was about... until I got to the end and then I started laughing! Nice work. Can't say I was ever subjected to vista however... thank god for that! looking forward to tit One flash of my perfect chest and he'll be knocked out in a happytime daydream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dartha Athanth Posted January 14, 2009 Share Posted January 14, 2009 Lol yeah, liked the way it seemed so serious and then suddenly i was like -_-". Darsha Assant turned dark at 2734 posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sasori Posted January 24, 2009 Author Share Posted January 24, 2009 Love Smells Like Poo What is this smell? A putrid stench Invading my body I come closer to the source My nose kept sniffing, more and more It was here I knew this was its origin A slight cry came as I picked up what stank I set it down and found a disgusting surprise I cleaned up the mess and disposed the stench And a smile lit her perfect face. Resident Tech and Video Game Geek Well, crap, Sasori is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted January 24, 2009 Share Posted January 24, 2009 Nice...very creative. Oh, and about the last one...I like Vista! I'm very satisfied with it. But I know I'm in the minority. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sasori Posted March 14, 2009 Author Share Posted March 14, 2009 Vacation For You, Sorrow For Me Every night was the same endless pain for you you hated the dark the bed I got for you I hold you in my arms I move from side to side walk you around until at last you rest your eyes I set you in bed and crawl into mine to catch a few winks before once again you cry I heat you some food and feed you a bit until the food settles and you drift off again I head into bed to grab a few winks yet again you are up and needing me And now you aren't here your bed is empty the mobile still the blanket askew silence in the night yet I am up waiting for you Resident Tech and Video Game Geek Well, crap, Sasori is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted March 14, 2009 Share Posted March 14, 2009 That is so sad... Well-written, though. I love the scheme and phrasing. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 Split as requested. Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sasori Posted March 22, 2009 Author Share Posted March 22, 2009 Split as requested. You, are a good person. Resident Tech and Video Game Geek Well, crap, Sasori is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted March 22, 2009 Share Posted March 22, 2009 Yeah...I know. Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sasori Posted May 24, 2010 Author Share Posted May 24, 2010 Tale of a Heart In my heart there was darkness Brought on by knives in my back Betrayal to its fullest had occurred And my heart wounded was wounded for the worse Anger filled the void, and remorse turned to hatred. In my heart there was a sickness For anger and hate were not to last And longing for consolation Left depression upon my being Till the point to near return To the one who will shove the knives in further. In my heart there was an emptiness Longing for something to fill the void But the pain of the wounds still existed And this prevented anything more It was cold those nights and how alone it felt All while trying to avoid the sirens call In my heart there was hope when another came from the past It began to feel complete With each and every message it received The new was lovely The new was compelling The new cared for the pain of this heart And nurtured it thoroughly. In my heart there was love A feeling that was thought long gone The heart began to feel warm once more And smiled through all the day The heart had found its pair And knew it would never hurt again. With that trust the heart did share, all its love it had to give. Resident Tech and Video Game Geek Well, crap, Sasori is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NavyGal Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 I really liked that! The imagery and the way it evolves as you read further. You can really see the journey through it. looking forward to tit One flash of my perfect chest and he'll be knocked out in a happytime daydream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dredik Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 Beautiful. *bangs bongo* My mom's gravy is the best you will EVER have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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