Guest Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 What can I say, Art, you've discussed ideas for this storyline with me, and talked about the writing of it for a while. It's excellent, you're an excellent writer. Why aren't we still writing together? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artemia Posted June 4, 2010 Author Share Posted June 4, 2010 Goodness, it has been forever, hasn't it? Well, if it's any consolation, Mia, Martin's sister has a bit of Artemia Ressalin's attitude...sort of her namesake really. "MEMORYYYYYY! ALLLLLL ALOOONE IN THE MOOOOOONLIIIIIGHT!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 That makes me smile. She lives yet! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 SOrry I've misseda a couple of posts Artemia. I like the length of the most recent one, it didnt feel yto long at all. And I think the pop culture references must have a point otherwise, as Ben said, it feels like it should be about 30 years earlier then it has been written. Nice little hook with the mother being shot too. Am looking forward to reading more. Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artemia Posted June 12, 2010 Author Share Posted June 12, 2010 I woke up in my bed. I opened my eyes and caught sight of Martin sitting at my desk, his cell phone to his ear. He hadn't noticed I was awake yet. ”œNo doubt. It had to be, given the circumstances. Make it clean.... Yeah, I know. I'm just glad I came and got her, otherwise....yeah.” "MEMORYYYYYY! ALLLLLL ALOOONE IN THE MOOOOOONLIIIIIGHT!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 Hmmmm...why do I get the feeling that Martin and Donovan are going to 'take care' of Ginas father? Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted July 2, 2010 Share Posted July 2, 2010 Update soon? Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jedi_master_gimpy Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Wow! A well written-drama! You have a simple prose with the first person perspective down pat to really draw us in to the story. As many others have said, you have added all the correct hooks through foreshadowing to keep us hanging! Really too bad that this story has not been updated in so long. "It's always these little worlds that get you in trouble. Like Tatooine. I'm still living that one down." - Han Solo Your barnacle has carnivorous salamanders the size of whales. "Let us hold unswervingly to the faith we profess, for he who promised is faithful." -Heb. 10:23 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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