NavyGal Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 (edited) This is a response to a challenge that Ami issued me on Facebook. To start or end a story with the sentence: ”œKnowing everything that this means for your life and the future of the worlds, we have just one question for you. Are you in?” Edited February 16, 2011 by Guest looking forward to tit One flash of my perfect chest and he'll be knocked out in a happytime daydream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 Great start!!! I'm definitely interested in what comes next! I really hope you continue this. Not much else to comment on except I didn't know I had made a typo when I posted it on Facebook.. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NavyGal Posted February 16, 2011 Author Share Posted February 16, 2011 Or that could have been me making a typo when I went to type up what I had written out today from work. *goes to fix* Thanks for spotting that. I definitely have more written already. I'll see what I can do about getting more up tomorrow. I don't see it being very long just because I get writers block the longer what I'm writing gets. Thanks also for reading Ami. It was a nice sentence to get me going. looking forward to tit One flash of my perfect chest and he'll be knocked out in a happytime daydream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashley Jade Skywalker Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 *gets dragged into thread* Good start, Nat. Hopefully the writer's block doesn't interfere too much because I could see this shaping into a pretty good story. [Jade Skywalkers FTW since August '03] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 Good response to a good prompt. I'm glad to see you writing something writerly. Kind of reminds me of Final Fantasy X. Maybe in a way it is best as it is, with no real answers given... short and sweet and full of mystery, though you could definitely continue this with no complaints on our end. Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryoo Jaxxon Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 Hey, you already know how I feel about the start. Not too shabby. I'm inerested in where you'll be taking this since the first bit kept it wide open. Keep writing and I'll keep coming back to read it For those of you who knew me, it was great, for those who didn't, welcome. http://www.naese.com/images/Ryoojaxxon.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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