Reptilia

Yeah, great work. He emailed me this (Feels proud)

I was worried when I saw him pass out, but I assumed that he was just exhausted. But what he said stuck to me, so I decided to try it but have some fun too. So I focused in on Galen, grabbed him with the force and made him float a foot up in the air. I quickly put him down realizing the danger of dropping him. "Sorry Galen"I said laughing.

"Okay" I said as I grabbed a leaf off the ground, concentrated, and lifted it up in the air. "This is the extent of my abilities, I can only levitate smaller objects." I told him as I incorporated more leafs into my levitation field. I let them drop to the ground. "Can you do anything else"I asked.

I noticed Galen had already made acquaintance with the newcomer. I stood back as they introduced each other. I had a few questions or him but they could wait. "I'll go get something to build a shelter." I said as I walked towards the Forrest. I grabbed my blaster out of my holster just in case of danger. I walked in a couple yards. Then I saw some pretty large trees; perfect for building. I got my saber and tried a few swings on it. It fell down and I dragged it back. When I reached the clearing that I assumed was our campsite I set it down. "I got some wood for some kind of shelter. We have to decide if we want a partway under ground one or maybe a tent style one."I said as I helped them get some wood. Then I decided to ask Roen my question. "Hello, I'm Reptilia. But where did you learn that scream thing you pulled off."

Ffft. I invited you to post your videos in fanfic. Reptila, please don't mini-mod. I'm the fanfic mod and you can PM me if you have an issue with something posted in fanfic. I believe this is posted in the appropriate (that is a hard word to type!) place! Fanfiction is fiction made by fans, fiction could be videos or comics. I mean, you might have better luck posting it in the funny videos thread in Poodoo, but you can post it there TOO. But it's your choice whether you want to consider it artwork or fiction. This is really just a script put to a video form, right? And some people post scripts, right? XD It's fine where it is. MOD APPROVED. I wasn't being a mini-mod, I didn't know he made it. I assumed it was just a funny vid, so I thought it would go in the Funny Vid Thread.

Arlan, maybe I just post more!

I looked over and saw Aira push back one of the creatures, and then shoot. As soon as I saw one come close to me I jumped to the side and let my blade drop down, so it charged right into it. It emitted a loud cry, the force of the blow hurt my wrist so I switched to my blaster and stared to pepper the animals with blaster bolts. ((Short Post, I know Sorry))

Well, I do start topics(Arlan!) and I post at school sometimes. Also I can get on at least few minutes everyday.

Its okay, I still don't get this site at times, even though I'm newer than most people here.

This is for Fanfic, not videos.

I heard a loud cry. I started running towards the direction of the call. Extended in my hand was my training saber. I didn't know what it was but I was ready for a fight. I jumped from a small ledge and landed in a clearing right next to Galen, and Aira. As I saw a Grey blur charging towards us. My left foot slid behind me, my left hand grasping the hilt of my weapon above my head pointed at the threat. "This will be fun"I said sarcastically towards my comrades.

As I entered the cave it got darker as I went in, so I ignited my Saber in one hand and had my blaster in the other. It seemed like an ordinary cave but it also pulled me in almost. I was here for a reason. I walked in farther and farther but when I turned around to look I would still see the entrance not more then a short distance away. I was using my hand on the wall for added stability, for there were rocks scattered about the ground. Then when I entered a section of the cave where light was entering through the cave ceiling. I saw a huge rock towards the center. I walked towards it and felt it, it was cold. At this point I already put my weapons away since there was no sign of danger. I sat down on the rock, then figures appeared in the room. It was my father, me and the man who ended my fathers life. The area surrounding me had changed into grassland and a few trees. I remembered this scene from my childhood, about 15 years ago. "Put down your weapon and kneel before me and I wont hurt your boy."The man said as he grabbed the young Kel Dor around the neck with his lightsaber drawn. "No, never, never will I kneel to such a coward"My father said as he leaped at the man. The man in reaction threw the younger me away. The clashing of there lightsabers was almost to fast to see. The Sith's red blade against the double-bladed fury of the Jedi's. The Sith then lifted me up in the air choking me, my father distracted turned away. That second of distraction was all he needed to stab the Jedi through the heart. He fell limp to the ground lifelessly. "Oh, your daddy wasn't strong enough to battle the Dark side."He said as he laughed. He then kicked my fathers lightsaber at me. "Maybe, you'll learn to use this decently." Everything faded away, I was alone in the cave. I sat there for awhile just thinking of what I could of done to save him. After deep deliberation I concluded that I couldn't of done anything differently. I got up and started for the entrance. I guess that's what I was supposed to come he for. As soon as I could see daylight I was in a excited mood.

Aira tossed me a blaster and saber. When I got the weapons I strapped the blaster to my belt, then I ignited my saber it beamed green. I strapped it in and faced the others. "I suggest we split up, we can contact each other though com links."I said as I turned and walked towards a forest. I kept a steady pace for a while until I got tired so I sat down against a tree. What am I looking for, where am I going? The thoughts rattled in my head. I decided to try and 'Train' with my training lightsaber I have received to give my mind a rest. I stood up, turned it on and practiced simple swings and maneuvers. I tossed a few rocks in the air and tried hitting them like when I was a kid. After a little bit I started off again. I kept my mind alert for anything suspicious or if I felt anything odd about it. Then I found a cave that I almost missed due to the entrance almost completely caved in. I didn't know what was in it so I grabbed my blaster had it at a ready position and walked in. If I need to, Galen and Aira are a message away, or if I find anything for a lightsaber.

"Lightsaber parts, and each other I believe."The kushiban said. I knew we were supposed to get to know each other but what lightsaber part are we to find. "Are we to find crystals"I proposed, when I was younger I learned a lot about Jedi lore. I know that the crystal is what gives the saber it's uniqueness, or almost its voice. Crystals grow naturally on planets such as Ilum, but I have never heard of Aracoun Morion at all before recently, much less if crystals grow here.

I landed our ship down, then I stood up and stretched. It had been a long trip, and I am not looking forward until the return one. I started towards the main hold, towards the door. Once I got outside I felt a weird sense of excitement. "So what are we supposed to find?"I asked Galen and Aira. ((OOC:Sorry for the short post I'm highly tired:D))

"Well, we will probably learn to do it... but to a greater degree during our training."I said "Its hard to do for me at this point" "Excuse me" I said as I got up and went to the refresher. When I came back I looked around a little bit. I hope we didn't get into anything dangerous because I couldn't find any training sabers or firearms. When I came back I sat down and looked into space, its weird ti think of how small you are compared to everything else. It really puts things into perspective.

"How did you move that water around without touching it back on Gala?" The question went through my head a few times, I almost replied a couple times but I stopped myself. "I don't know. I concentrated and tried to feel the force, like what Master Kirlocca said. The first few times I tried I messed up but I guess practice makes perfect." I replied "So where are we stopping?" I asked.

I'm confused.

I actually thought that was pretty cool, anyway try and get the next chapter in by Tuesday. I also want the bad guys towin so add that in too. Lol. I wasn't kidding.

I actually thought that was pretty cool, anyway try and get the next chapter in by Tuesday. I also want the bad guys to win so add that in too.

Its good, but I want to know more about the other Jedi like their names.

I'm confused if there are six people how come you only listed the races of four of them? Other then that its a good story.

Archives, but don't do it to the one in RP there might be suggestions.

Posting this in the RP section.

I want permission from the PC's who had part in the attack on Gala Temple and aftermath in the RP section. I want to pretty much make a story out of it, but add some of stuff like dialogue. As the temple is getting rebuilt still so this may wait a little bit. I will try not to mess this up. So can I have permission to use characters, dialogue, and posts from the following, Main plot : Lord Ar-Pharazon Malin Kyrell wookiee jedi ObsidianKnight Xae-Lin Ardel Piccolo Aryian Darkfire Just as cameos: Aira Cadan Galen Roen Givrah Evander