Dartha Athanth Posted May 18, 2008 Share Posted May 18, 2008 (edited) Oh well, I'm up for a little five minute challenge! Oh woe is me! I am a tree! I wish I were free! I is emoingggzzzzzzzzzz. Oh how dark the sky! It is so high! I wish I could fly! I is emoingggzzzzzzzzzzz. Oh how torturous my life! It's full of strife! Now I slit my wrists with a knife! I is emoingggzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Oh how sad, respite! I have nought to write! Except this lousy poem tonight! I is emoingggzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Ok that was less than five minutes. edit: edit 2: random comment removed to prevent it from being mistaken as another poem/part of the poem. Anyway, it was bad. hahaha. Edited May 19, 2008 by Guest Darsha Assant turned dark at 2734 posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin T Skywalker Posted May 18, 2008 Share Posted May 18, 2008 Was that one poem or two? Thanks, Tiana! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skywalker_Heir Posted May 18, 2008 Share Posted May 18, 2008 Glorious! Magnificent! YOU WILL MAKE MILLIONS! *cough cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero Posted May 18, 2008 Share Posted May 18, 2008 I'm so confused. Parallels II: Ghost of the Force Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dartha Athanth Posted May 19, 2008 Author Share Posted May 19, 2008 Eh one. The 2nd bit was a comment about the ads. Now it's a free Demo of a Firewall analyzer. If any of my teachers see the poem though.... Well it IS bad, isn't it. Darsha Assant turned dark at 2734 posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin T Skywalker Posted May 19, 2008 Share Posted May 19, 2008 Yes, it is rather bad. If I was your teacher and you showed me such a poem and seriously thought it was good, I might send you to visit the counselor. Have you seen my bad poems? I think if I tried to pass those off as real poetry, I'd get locked up. Only question is whether it would be in prison or the asylum. Thanks, Tiana! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted May 19, 2008 Share Posted May 19, 2008 Good bad poetry, Darsha!! Very enjoyable. Poor emo tree. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dartha Athanth Posted May 19, 2008 Author Share Posted May 19, 2008 I just realised that trees have no wrists, but i was thinking in terms of rubber tappers. Anyway it's supposed to be a bad poem. Thanks guys for reviewing! Darsha Assant turned dark at 2734 posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted May 20, 2008 Share Posted May 20, 2008 ...Wow. (twitches) It hurts me inside! Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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