Tiana Calthye Posted March 28, 2008 Share Posted March 28, 2008 One moment of exchange: 55 words: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Challenge response. NSW or not, you decide. Incidentially, I consider the dialogue ending with the question mark, carrying on into a tag, one sentence. Dialogue We've been quiet for so long, I have to know. ”œAre you all right, Master?” Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin T Skywalker Posted March 29, 2008 Share Posted March 29, 2008 Wow! Yet another one! Amazing! I like it! Thanks, Tiana! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted March 29, 2008 Share Posted March 29, 2008 These are interesting. I like this one. Although it makes me want to read the story it's an excerpt from! It feels like an excerpt, even though in my rational mind I know it's not. My only question--why didn't you post them all in one thread? It's obviously your perogative, but I'm curious why you chose to do it this way. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted March 29, 2008 Author Share Posted March 29, 2008 I wrote them at different times in the night and basically posted them immediately after, and didn't want to double post or edit. I felt they merited their own threads. And... you're right. It's kind of an exerpt from a scene that wasn't written. I'm pretending it was Star Wars inspired, but it's not. Not really. Except what it comes from isn't really... yeah. I don't know, we'll see, I'll bug Jandalf. It was just some senseless angst. Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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