Hindsight Is Not Perfect

[Obi-quiet]

Well I have to admit that I did indeed think I put all of that in there. ^^; I may go through the story again, but it's already written and I already have a sequel planned, so I may or may not actually change anything. I only posted this because I felt like he/she presented their argument fairly well (if a little too aggressively) and wanted to know if that might be something other people thought about.

 

Thanks, Gimpy. I really appreciate it.

[Amidala Skywalker]

I agree with Gimpy. I think it just comes down to a different point of view. I'm not going to reiterate what she said, but I do agree with her. I think you could have taken the story either way and both ways are completely valid. This reviewer was simply coming at it from the other way, and so he saw inconsistencies and moments where Anakin was out of character. I think you did a great job showing your take on Anakin in this.