Guest Posted October 30, 2009 Share Posted October 30, 2009 I have tried to make it readable forward and backward. Not sure if this is what you had in mind but here goes... Happily ever after it might yet be... The children singing under the tree The force gathered beneath their feet Ready to take a great leap Only together could they have lit the crown Dispelled the darkness that fell all around Given him standing on firm ground Amidst plumes of ash and smoke, they stand together All the good that ever was in him The shreds of the force that walk with them Saying its not too late, together we may yet unlock the gate Please find me, I'm all alone on this cross Your my anchors and my sanity, without you I'm lost Walking free, yet forever bound to anothers whims No choice but to wallow in sin The tide of the darkside rises within Somewhere small specks of good calling to him But casting back the light, evil gathers and smites In the end all you can do is fight Only under the light will you find a solution to this plight Turn from darkness, light your torches, reach out Fear not the shadows, all they can sow is doubt When will they stop running from the truth, the fear in tow To each in his own time one must suppose It could have been happily ever after But for Once upon a time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted October 31, 2009 Share Posted October 31, 2009 Each story, challenge response, or poem gets its own thread so I took the liberty of splitting yours from Darsha's. You can rename it if you want. Great poem, by the way. Nice imagery. Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted November 1, 2009 Share Posted November 1, 2009 Nice poem! I like it...good imagery and feeling. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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