Minus One Posted April 7, 2009 Share Posted April 7, 2009 (edited) Living on clouds, my head's in the sky Feeling myself, slipping too high Wanting to laugh or wanting to cry Wanting to run and wanting to smile Trying to think, my thoughts turn to fog Trying my best, to express in a song Something with feeling, something that's real Trying to best, the feelings I feel Something feels wrong... but something feels right Some days I can't seem to sleep through the night I wonder all hours, ”œShould I get in the race?” Edited March 18, 2010 by Guest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted April 7, 2009 Share Posted April 7, 2009 I really, really like those lyrics. They just seemed to flow really nicely, and I could almost hear music with them. Nice stuff. I really enjoyed it. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minus One Posted April 8, 2009 Author Share Posted April 8, 2009 Thanks Ami I had 'inspiration'. I wrote an acoustic bit for it, but my guitarist read it too and said he had riffs immediately, so I haven't recorded anything. If you'd like to hear my guitar stuff, check out the website link on my profile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dartha Athanth Posted April 8, 2009 Share Posted April 8, 2009 maelstrom? Is this song about Mael? Is there a way to listen to it? I wanna hear it, it sounds cool! Darsha Assant turned dark at 2734 posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted April 8, 2009 Share Posted April 8, 2009 Yeah, it works pretty well as a song. Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minus One Posted April 19, 2009 Author Share Posted April 19, 2009 I just got done recording a demo of the music I wrote to go along with this. Audacity, however, decided it wasn't gonna pick up my lows and I had to up the bass to compensate. http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/zerodiablos/ I think I mess up the F a couple times... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minus One Posted April 24, 2009 Author Share Posted April 24, 2009 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ces-6O5hzO0 My pick flies into the guitar at the end so it's cut off a little. I've posted a ton of lyrics before, but now you guys can actually hear a song I've wrote. Be warned though: I can't sing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jedi Master Posted April 24, 2009 Share Posted April 24, 2009 Nice lyrics, man. For some reason when I was reading it I kind of put it more to the tune of The Beatles' song "The Fool on the Hill". Only after we've lost everything are we free to do anything. Paper Street Press Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted April 24, 2009 Share Posted April 24, 2009 Not bad! A bit repetitive melody-wise, but I still really like the lyrics. I could definately hear some interesting melody riffs to go with it in my head, and by the end I was singing along. Rather catchy, I must say. I'll not comment much on your singing skills, but I will say that I've heard worse singers. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dartha Athanth Posted April 25, 2009 Share Posted April 25, 2009 I agree with Ami - it can get a little repetitive, but it's singeable by most people because the vocal range isn't large at all. Maybe making it larger would make it more interesting? Oh well, we should get ATS in here, she's the music major. Lol did your string snap at the last bit or something? And was that the F-word? Hahahaha Darsha Assant turned dark at 2734 posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minus One Posted April 25, 2009 Author Share Posted April 25, 2009 No, my pick slipped out of my hand and flew into the opening on my guitar. And yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minus One Posted June 4, 2009 Author Share Posted June 4, 2009 Up next is a concept album I'm working on. Existence starts out as nothingness, called the Infinite. The Infinite inexplicably fractures into three: the light (Amaron), the darkness, (Zaros), and consciousness, giving everything in existence awareness. Zaros can't see without his brother's help and becomes angered by his dependence. He wishes to rather not exist at all, and wants to re-unite the Infinite. Amaron wishes to continue to exist and transforms himself into the realms and creates the Weave; an armor to protect himself. The humans of these worlds are effected by consciousness as well and soon divide into two factions: evil (those who want the destruction of the worlds and the reunion of the Infinite) and good (protectors of the realm and followers of Amaron) The Infinite Stumbling in darkness Brother can see Crawling in circles No light for me Infinite fracture Void is in three Jealousy raging Time isn't free Fracture giveth life Brother's cries go unheard I am the Great Divide Brother of darkness One born to light And one to reason, Make the two fight I am the Great Divide Spiderweb glass Shatter, shatter. I break to pieces Faster, faster. Dominoes falling Forever collapsing Darkness is biting Wake from my sleep The worlds and the stars Weave protecting Infinite fracture Lands and the seas Glorious rapture All that I breathe Gods walking backwards The Weave ever spans No thought of hardship No need to feel bad The son of our makers We're all that's left We are the takers Of our masters' hands Disciples of the Fracture We are the knights of peace, guardians of the free There will be no reunion People give us grief, dangers they can't see Protect the heart of Amaron The Infinite has died Our god has had his time Disciples of the Fracture We will not divide Our own are out of line, it must be a sign There will be no reunion We're a dying kind, shatter space and time We have made the decision Believe in what we say, blind trust in The Way There will be no reunion Crisis of your faith, the danger is away Can't undo what has been done. You can listen to a demo of the second song here: http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/zerodiablos/music/all/play627466 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted June 5, 2009 Share Posted June 5, 2009 Interesting...I don't have time to listen to the demo right now, but I want to. Your lyrics are good. They have a mystical feel, which I think goes well with the mini-plot you described. Good stuff. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minus One Posted July 13, 2009 Author Share Posted July 13, 2009 I'm supposed to be working on Parallels 2 right now, but my inspiration has been drawn to something else. This is called In My Arms. Remembering days long past When you were in my arms A smile crept across my face But now that smile's gone A touch that was so comforting Your eyes so full of charm I would do just anything To be back in your arms You bring brightness to my day Despite a world of black Don't know why I let you fade I know I want you back Wondering why you aren't here A hurt that I can't take I just want to hear you say Listen, it's not too late Crappy quality with vocals (video) Good quality with bass line and no vocals Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 Got a new video for Disciples. My amp was broken for over two years and I got a new guitar (tuned down a full step). Enjoy! (if you like metal that is) I promise it's good quality! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7bzexsJyIdY Parallels II: Ghost of the Force Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero Posted March 18, 2010 Share Posted March 18, 2010 Barthandelus (Fallacy) Barthandelus fallacy Once again has fallen me Do or die paradigm Fallacy silhouette Staggering with regret Stone smile, tortured eyes Feeble man, just a guise Puppet like you? No I'm more. Meet the Maker, my true form Sacrifice. Promised new life Fallacy silhouette Staggering with regret Stone smile, tortured eyes Feeble man, just a guise Sanctuary crumbling Crystal tear, suffering Thrown away, focus dies Monstrous, vilify. Barthandelus fallacy Steel wings, fluttering Darkened skies, my defeat Sanctuary crumbling Crystal tear, suffering Thrown away, focus dies Monstrous, vilify. Barthandelus fallacy Once again has fallen me Do or die paradigm Feeble man, just a guise And some guitar to get the idea of the melody. The first verse is 0:22 - 0:44. Critique welcomed. Parallels II: Ghost of the Force Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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