JediKaren Posted March 23, 2009 Share Posted March 23, 2009 So in my boost of creative writing, I thought up this little gem. I hope you like it. Notes: Strangely enough, without connection to this story, my father is making a very evil stew. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Part 1 Obi Wan groaned. ”œOh Anakin, how could you?” Bringing Light into Darkness Join the Psiworld Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted March 23, 2009 Share Posted March 23, 2009 haha. I enjoyed that. Good laugh and I can imagine Yoda using the stew as punishment. lol. Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin T Skywalker Posted March 23, 2009 Share Posted March 23, 2009 Awww... very amusing. Strictly speaking, I believe I heard somewhere that Yoda's cooking, though some of the ingredients are unusual, tastes all right - but it's much more entertaining to think of it this way! Thanks, Tiana! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NavyGal Posted March 23, 2009 Share Posted March 23, 2009 Hahaha that was great! I love it when people write these little quirky peices. Now I'm curious as to what Obi-Wan did/said to have to eat the stew looking forward to tit One flash of my perfect chest and he'll be knocked out in a happytime daydream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted March 23, 2009 Share Posted March 23, 2009 Very amusing. Interesting to see nine-year-old Ani, too, because fics from this era usually place him a few years later. Nice little touch. And I agree with Nat--I want to know what Obi-Wan did. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 I miss the old 'gag-fic' fics. I thought it was funny. And now I want to know what Obi-Wan did but I suppose if we knew the joke would be gone. “But he’s dead!” “That’s your problem I laughed. Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dartha Athanth Posted March 24, 2009 Share Posted March 24, 2009 Haha great little piece! I want to see real graphic descriptions of what happens to Anakin when he eats the stew.... Oh, and welcome back! Darsha Assant turned dark at 2734 posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKaren Posted March 27, 2009 Author Share Posted March 27, 2009 You all are welcomed. Here is part two: Part Two Obi Wan looked as he heard the door slid open. A young, blond hair boy with pale skin and a less than happy, slightly green face came in. The boy rushed to the near by bathroom and only after long minutes passed, did he come out, sweaty and sick looking. ”œSo, how did it go?” Bringing Light into Darkness Join the Psiworld Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 LOL! I loved Obi-Wan and Anakin's interaction. I think it was a little out of character for Obi-Wan to be encouraging Anakin to break the rules, but it's AU, so it was perfectly fine. I loved Anakin's rendition of what he went through eating the stew, and his comment on Hutts and their sense of smell. Makes me wonder what Luke did to deserve some stew in ESB! Maybe just because he pulled a blaster on Yoda. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKaren Posted March 27, 2009 Author Share Posted March 27, 2009 or he was that whiny Bringing Light into Darkness Join the Psiworld Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dartha Athanth Posted March 27, 2009 Share Posted March 27, 2009 Lol! My favourite bit was the Hutt bit too! They do have big nostrils though. Darsha Assant turned dark at 2734 posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth KenObi-Wan Posted March 29, 2009 Share Posted March 29, 2009 LOL! I've read this somewhere else. FFn, if I remember correctly.... Hmm. It's as good the second time round as it is the first. Bravo! This is my signature. You seem to be reading it. Interesting, no? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediKaren Posted April 1, 2009 Author Share Posted April 1, 2009 Yep I posted it there first. Glad you liked it. Bringing Light into Darkness Join the Psiworld Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catalyst Posted May 7, 2009 Share Posted May 7, 2009 That was very amusing. It might have been even funner (is that a word? funner?) if there was a tad (I only mean a tad) more exposition. But as it is it's still a fun little read. Thanks for posting it. Lost in a state of confusion...which might be between Rhode Island and Denmark...hmm...now where is that map? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Posted June 23, 2009 Share Posted June 23, 2009 This piece made me laugh out loud at 4:30 in the morning...Great interaction between Obi-Wan and Anakin. What's funny is I could actually see that happening in like a young adult EU novel or something. And after reading Dark Rendevous I could see Yoda doing something like this as well. All in all a very funny read! Proud member of the JNET Addicts Club since November '05 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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