Amidala Skywalker Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 (edited) Alright, this is dedicated to Andon. It's not that great, and it feels awkward at times, but I felt like writing it, so I'm going to post it. So there. *** I knew I wasn’t going to like Hoth the moment I stepped foot on the planet’s icy surface. The wind drove hard, throwing bits of frozen water through the cracks in my shiny golden casing. Not that, I reflected mournfully, it would stay shiny for long. I shuffled through the snow as fast as my servomotors could carry me, hoping that inside the shield doors it would be at least a few degrees warmer. As soon as I stepped foot inside the base, I heard a familiar rude twitter. “I don’t know why we had to come to this freezing place,” I commented to my counterpart. His reply was short and brusque. “Yes, I know the asteroid field makes it a good hiding spot for the Alliance; I just don’t understand why we always seem to end up on the worst planets in the galaxy. Why can’t the Alliance form a base somewhere nice, like on Naboo?” Artoo ignored me and whirred off. I followed him, heading towards the Princess’ chambers. When I arrived, I saw the Princess had already left for the command center. She was very hard-working for a human being. A cargo droid whirred up slowly behind me and deposited her luggage. I lifted a bag to the bed and began to unpack. Princess Leia didn’t have nearly enough clothing for someone of her rank. All of her possessions had been packed in two small cases. I shook my head in disapproval. There was a time when I served Captain Antilles that we escorted a princess from the Y’Toub system. She had had fifteen large pieces of luggage, most of which carried her extensive wardrobe. Now that, I reflected, had been proper for a princess. In very little time, I had Princess Leia’s bags unpacked. I neatly organized her clothes in the closet and stored the cases away. My joints were stiff; my internal thermometer informed me that it was -15 C degrees, and I mimicked a shiver. How the humans were going to survive in this climate I really didn’t know. My task complete, I headed toward the command center to report in. I was almost there when Captain Solo came striding down the narrow hallway. “Hey, Goldenrod!” he called, addressing me by an insulting term, “Is the Princess unpacked?” I ignored the nickname, as my programming dictated. “Yes, Captain Solo. Although I must say that it is--” “Where is she?” “In the command center, Captain S--” He strode off without another word. “Well, really!” I exclaimed. As I checked in at the center and received my assignment, I continued to puzzle over human behavior. Why couldn’t they be more logical, like droids? I was programmed to understand them, but over and over it appeared to me that my programming was incomplete. I stopped wondering and focused on the task I had been assigned to. As I did, I caught sight of myself in the reflective properties of a comm panel. My plating was marred already by the corrosive elements in this planet’s atmosphere. Oh, dear. Edited January 21, 2018 by Guest SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 We don't see much from Threepios POV. I quite liked it. You captured his personality quite well I thought. Is this a one shot? or a longer piece? Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted November 17, 2008 Author Share Posted November 17, 2008 Just a one shot, but I suppose I could write more if I wanted to. But that wasn't the plan. Thanks for commenting, B. It was kinda fun to write it, though hard. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dartha Athanth Posted November 17, 2008 Share Posted November 17, 2008 Yay, new fic! I liked how the fact that it's 3po is only revealed towards the end.. i had originally thought it was going to be one of those regular rebellion hero thingy angsty thing. I do like the way anthony daniels says 'oh dear'! Darsha Assant turned dark at 2734 posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin T Skywalker Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 I had that it was Threepio pretty much right away. Good job with him! I also liked the insight into Princess Leia's character and the comparison to other royalty. Thanks, Tiana! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted November 18, 2008 Share Posted November 18, 2008 I also liked the insight into Princess Leia's character and the comparison to other royalty. That was something I can see a protocol droid 'thinking'...very realistic. Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted November 19, 2008 Share Posted November 19, 2008 Hmm, I wonder if it wasn't too much thinking for a droid, I'm not sure that he would ignore the nickname as such, rather than respond because he recognized that it was himself being addressed. I think he likely should have had more wordy of thoughts as well... I mean, it was a good idea, it's just not quite clicking as Threepio narrative to me. And it's a good short fic, nice POV thing... just not quite there yet. I don't know what's just not clicking right for me to explain it, though. I like your personification of Artoo. I don't know why everyone likes him, he strikes me as a very rude little droid. Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted November 20, 2008 Author Share Posted November 20, 2008 Yeah, I totally think Artoo's sassy. You captured my feelings on this peice, T. I'm meh about it. But considering I wrote it in ten minutes.... I'm glad people enjoyed it. I just got an urge and carried it out. Blah. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joreel Ordo Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 This is a great piece of work! The only think I am not sure of is 3PO himself. Can he think? Have emotions? I know he could get learned behavior through reactions of humans over time, but he is younger than Artoo and had his memory wiped once so he had to start his programming from scratch around 20BBY. But that is a more Watto's Shop question Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reptilia Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 I think he has a basic amount of thought in his head on the lines of Human interactions and then there is is his computer brain that can react to things fast and learn Human behavior and languages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth KenObi-Wan Posted November 23, 2008 Share Posted November 23, 2008 Lol. That's awesome! Only Threepio would worry that she didn't have enough luggage in a situation where they may have to evacuate at any moment. This is my signature. You seem to be reading it. Interesting, no? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted November 24, 2008 Author Share Posted November 24, 2008 Lol...yep, he certainly has priority issues! Thanks for reading! SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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