Zero Posted April 17, 2008 Share Posted April 17, 2008 It was unbelievably hot and sweat was dripping from Anakin's face. He looked across the bank of lava and saw Obi-Wan with a smug look on his face. ”œIt's over, Anakin; I have the high ground!” Parallels II: Ghost of the Force Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 17, 2008 Share Posted April 17, 2008 ....... For a second there I was expecting Anakin to kick him in the face, but "the lulz" was wonderful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skywalker_Heir Posted April 17, 2008 Share Posted April 17, 2008 I... Just... I think my brain broke. Good story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scorp Jedi Knight Posted April 18, 2008 Share Posted April 18, 2008 That was... interesting. Quite a jumpy around story. the transitions were pretty sudden. Um... the ending... yea.... It is like a left side of my brain blew up and my left eye started to twitch Well, you could always just post something like "OMG GREAT FIC WOW!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted April 18, 2008 Share Posted April 18, 2008 Umm...okay...I think if I knew what 'lulz' was it would be better... Yeah, interesting twists though. You captured a lot of anger well. Good work. SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted April 18, 2008 Share Posted April 18, 2008 Umm...okay...I think if I knew what 'lulz' was it would be better... Yeah, interesting twists though. You captured a lot of anger well. Good work. "Lol" pronounced out loud becomes 'lawl' which sounds like 'lul' + z. He did it for the laughs. It was funny, as an actual AU I think I would've liked it more... but I was expecting a gag by the sudden transactions and things, because you usually pay more attention than that. It was a good AU idea in itself and the punchline was amusing too. I think it's a bit like my brain blew up, though. Yep. This could actually be a great AU if you took the time to flesh it out, like Parallels. Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin T Skywalker Posted April 19, 2008 Share Posted April 19, 2008 Yeah, I totally didn't get what was going on at first. It was so rushed, with everybody dying do quickly, and I kept thinking, "This can't be a serious story, Zero's other writing is so much better paced and more thoughtful." And then I got to the end and it wasn't a serious story. You get your lulz, too! Thanks, Tiana! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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