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The Death of a Great Jedi (Short Story) (Fin)


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Umm...okay...I think if I knew what 'lulz' was it would be better...

 

Yeah, interesting twists though. You captured a lot of anger well. Good work.

"Lol" pronounced out loud becomes 'lawl' which sounds like 'lul' + z.

 

 

He did it for the laughs.

 

It was funny, as an actual AU I think I would've liked it more... but I was expecting a gag by the sudden transactions and things, because you usually pay more attention than that. It was a good AU idea in itself and the punchline was amusing too.

 

I think it's a bit like my brain blew up, though. Yep.

 

This could actually be a great AU if you took the time to flesh it out, like Parallels.

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Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that.
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Yeah, I totally didn't get what was going on at first. It was so rushed, with everybody dying do quickly, and I kept thinking, "This can't be a serious story, Zero's other writing is so much better paced and more thoughtful."

 

And then I got to the end and it wasn't a serious story.

 

You get your lulz, too!

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Thanks, Tiana!

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