Ryan Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 The Empire Strikes Turkey? - The Untold Story of Cloud City This is the story of what really happened with Han and Co. joined Vader on Cloud City. Challenge Response to December's challenge #2! Star Wars Christmas! Oh, and I wrote a story in under 500 words! Challenge #7. Two challenges in one story! * * * ”œWe would be honored if you would join us,” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amidala Skywalker Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 LOL! That was the most bizarre thing I've ever read! My only crit was that it needed more explanation that they did this every year. I'd have liked to have seen more conversation too, to show how the relationships were relaxed and they were all friends. Of course, that would have put you over 500 words... Anyway, very amusing and nice job! SHE MEANS TO END US ALL!!! DOOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!!!!11eleventyone! There goes Ami's reputation of being a peaceful, nice person. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darth shadowlord Posted December 16, 2007 Share Posted December 16, 2007 Silas, Nice work lad. I got a good laugh out of it. E nomini patri, et Fili e spiritu sancti. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obi-here Posted December 17, 2007 Share Posted December 17, 2007 Hey! That was actually a pretty fun read. Nice work, my friend. Personally (and I know it's supposed to be under 500 words), I would love to see you bring this out more and extend it a bit. Have some fun with the dialogue. You could take that in so many directions and bring a whole lot more laughs to the table (pun). Give us more of a feel for their personality and make it even more ridiculous. Still, funny story. Made me smile when I needed to smile. Thanks. "The circle is complete! Now I [Obi-here] am the angst Master!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin T Skywalker Posted March 17, 2008 Share Posted March 17, 2008 Darth Vader having his family and friends for Christmas dinner! Priceless! What a creative idea! Thanks, Tiana! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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