Jidai Geki Posted November 8, 2007 Share Posted November 8, 2007 (edited) THIS STORY CONTAINS BLOODY PASSAGES AND ALLUSIONS TO SEXUAL ACTIVITY Manchester Evening News, Friday September 19th 2008 MATHS TEACHER SAVAGED BY FEMALE STUDENT IN ALLEGED MISCONDUCT CASE Jill Foster A 35 year-old Maths teacher was in stable condition in Manchester Royal Infirmary last night after a bizarre incident which has left police baffled. 15 year-old high school student Janine Fletcher and the unnamed man were found in a store cupboard at All Saints High School in what witnesses described as a ”œstate of undress” Edited March 8, 2008 by Guest http://www.themire.co.uk-- being a veracious and lurid account of the goings-on in the savage Mire and the sootblown alleys of Portstown's Rookery! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hou-Jo Poleb Posted November 8, 2007 Share Posted November 8, 2007 Geki, once again, you have caught my eye with an intriguing story that is different from the norm of this forum that I also find a good read. Bravo. This is precisely why everyone should have a zombie plan (not that is actually zombies). You just never know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 9, 2007 Share Posted November 9, 2007 I think this is a really cool idea, how each update can be in the form of a diary entry. I know I'm not exactly well read but I can't think of seeing this way of doing things before. The story can go on as long or as short as you wish, and I guess from first person perspectives of multiple characters. Such a simple way of writing I'd never really considered it before, but so effective. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading. Nice one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Minus One Posted November 9, 2007 Share Posted November 9, 2007 We're not using the Zed word Geki! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NavyGal Posted November 9, 2007 Share Posted November 9, 2007 Kinda Resident Evil-ish feel. I like it. It's different from the norm as HJP said and looking good! looking forward to tit One flash of my perfect chest and he'll be knocked out in a happytime daydream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted November 10, 2007 Share Posted November 10, 2007 It's pretty interesting. Me is being too lazy to critize. Really sucks for your narrator, though... I already have the feeling that almost everyone is going to die. ^^ Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jidai Geki Posted November 16, 2007 Author Share Posted November 16, 2007 Brighton Evening Herald, Saturday September 20th 2008 WOMAN ARRESTED AS HUSBAND FOUND ”œDEVOURED” http://www.themire.co.uk-- being a veracious and lurid account of the goings-on in the savage Mire and the sootblown alleys of Portstown's Rookery! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xae-Lin Ardel Posted November 29, 2007 Share Posted November 29, 2007 Wow... I must say I am greatly amused by this story. I like the mixture of news with the diary entries. I'm curious to see how this goes. Faith is the confidence that what we hope for will actually happen; it gives us assurance about things we cannot see. PM Mirdala if you'd like a timely response. Leave anonymous IC feedback here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ar-Pharazon Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 I am also enjoying this. Good work JG! [Associate of the Illinois Mafia since November 2002.] Member of the Four Horsemen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 I haven't read much in here for a long time, but Geki, damn brilliant. Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skye Organa Posted December 8, 2007 Share Posted December 8, 2007 Very interesting story there Lee. Like the format. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jidai Geki Posted March 8, 2008 Author Share Posted March 8, 2008 ALLUSIONS TO VIOLENCE AND LESBIAN ACTIVITY Diary of Steven Walker, Tuesday October 7th 2008 Frank's flipping out again. He says that we're bunch of mardarses and that there's nothing to be scared of. Says they won't dare touch a gang of fifteen men. He reckons that if we don't make a break for it tomorrow, he's going on his. Once he's in a car, he says, they won't be able to stop him anyway. Kieran agrees, surprisingly enough. He says that if any of the bitches lay a finger on him, he's gonna slap them silly. Apparently, he ”œdon't take no shit off birds” http://www.themire.co.uk-- being a veracious and lurid account of the goings-on in the savage Mire and the sootblown alleys of Portstown's Rookery! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthBrendo Posted March 8, 2008 Share Posted March 8, 2008 Another incredibly well written post Geki. Still very intriguing and the way you're writing it gives it, to me, 28 Days Later sort of feel to it. Member of Jnet Addict Club 12/05 Order of the Nocturnal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tiana Calthye Posted March 9, 2008 Share Posted March 9, 2008 Aha, now I think I know what's going on. Kind of. Welcome back. This was an interesting, different sort of story. Freaky, definately not a movie I could watch, but interesting for literature. Liking the format. Liking the characters. Secretly waiting to see how long it takes for them to all die. Just when I thought it was over, I watched Tiana kick Almira in the head, effectively putting her out of her misery. I did not expect that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin T Skywalker Posted May 3, 2008 Share Posted May 3, 2008 Well, I have to say, this is pretty creepy. Not really the genre I prefer to read. But, it does seem to be well-written - just not the type of plot I enjoy most. I'm sure there are other people who do, though, so keep going, by all means. Thanks, Tiana! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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