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  1. Areas- Aundair, Khorvaire (Characters homeland) Thrane, Khorvaire Mournland, Khorvaire The Talenta Plains, Khorvaire O Barra Coast, Khorvaire The Wild Coast, Faerun (Others to come) The Triumvirate- Queen Aurala ir'Wynarn- Absolute Monarch Adal- First Warlord and Royal Minister of Magic Lord Darro ir'Lain- Second Warlord of the Realm and Commander of the Knights Arcane Antagonist- Lord Darro ir'Lain Protagonists- Ziv Goldheart- Gnome Sorcerer Tyr- Human Bard Hoggit- Dwarf Fighter Dergin- Gnome Cleric (High Preist of Garl Glittergold) I don't have much of a plot yet, I know that Lord Darro is going to kill Adal and the Queen but I don't know how he will do it. Ziv and Dergin will be imprisoned; they will all escape and travel to Thrane where they will meet Tyr. I'll be working on this for a few hours and I'll post an update. If anyone is interested in helping me (I'm horrible with dialogue so I'll need a lot of help with it, I'll also need help with character development) Edit- Ziv will be the only one imprisoned, he will escape and meet Dergin at Thrane. Tyr will be met later on in the story
  2. Jordan

    Space

    Nadroj rose as he was commanded. He stared at the man for a moment, or atleast he thought it to be a man. The mans eyes, or slits of absentness, for that is what they looked like. Nadroj then noticed the two sabers. Nadroj quickly scrambled around his ship to find his. "Damn!" He muttred to himself when he relised that he had not made one yet. He grabed his training saber and weilded it as he jumped out of his ship. "Who and what are you?"
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    Bakura

    Nadroj Ehtylb blasted out of hyperspace over Bakura. He had been meditating for the past 4 months and thought about what to do. His master abandoning made him feel sick to the Jedi. Nadroj, still being only 14 years old, he held grudges very well. He vowed to destroy the Jedi and all that they stood for, he would become”¦. A SITH.
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    Space

    Nadroj's ship is floating in the great void of space. He had been floating there for three months, ever seince his master left him to die. Nadroj woke up. "R8 set course for Bakura." His droid beeped and set the course faithfuly. A few minutes later there was a loud bang and Nadroj's ship blased off to Bakura.
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    Space

    Nadroj sat down and meditated whille the ship jumped to hyperspace.
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    Acrid

    Nadroj thought for a second. "Master I think we should go to The Last Call. The Sith have no idea that we will be there. The force will guide us, Master." Nadroj turned to face her. 'Should we be back on the ship?" Nadroj gave a weary thought in his head about his masters flying. I hope we will survive the night. I have a very bad feeling about this.
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    Space

    Nadroj bowed to her as they landed. "Yes, master." The ships docking door opened and him and his master walked out and on to the planet.
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    Space

    ”œWell, you asked for it master!”
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    Space

    Nadroj blocked her in a flash of blue and green light. The duel was raging on, Nadroj tried to find a pattern in her moves, he tried to remember what his former master had taught him before she died. Millennia before the Clone Wars, advanced technology replaced metal swords with energy-beam lightsabers. In this transition the first form was born. Jedi Masters created Form 1 from ancient sword-fighting tradition, since the principles of blade combat remained much the same. The basics of attack, parry, body target zones, and the practice drills called velocities are all here. So he tried to find a pattern again. It seemed like it was Left shoulder, Right shoulder, Left leg, Right leg, Head. But there were other moves between those. He was losing his focus and missed her saber and accidentally hit her. ”œTerribly sorry master. Shall we continue?”
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    Space

    Nadroj walked over to a table to where all the training lightsabers are. ”œHmmm, decisions, decisions.”
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    Space

    Nadroj sighed, ”œYes master.”
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    Space

    Nadroj walked into the cargo hold and met her there. ”œI'm here and ready to begin my training! What shall we do? Probe droids, perhaps? Maybe you could teach me lightsaber form 1?”
  13. Nadroj looked at her. ”œBut Master wh”¦”
  14. Jordan walked around the base for a while. Jordan went to the youngling room and watched them practice their lightsaber techniques with their Jedi masters. Then he walked down to the Jedi archives. As he walked into the archive room he could not help to notice all of the rows of archives. There had to be at least 1000 rows of archives. When he was done he went down to the training room to meet his master. As he entered through the doors to the room he felt as if he had just walked into a strobe of blue and green flashes. He walked over to the farthest wall and saw his master. ”œI am here master. What shall we do?”
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    Space

    "Yes master." With that Nadroj concentrated very deeply on the training remote and tried to stop it before it hit the ground. On his first try he was not able to stop it. The training remote hit the ground and flew back up and fell again. This time Nadroj was ready and he cought it in midair, he decided to showoff and do some tricks with it. He made it do back flips and spin aroud untill he started feeling queezy. Nadroj stood up and bowed to his master. "Was that good?"
  16. Jordan

    Space

    Nadroj was walking around her ship when he got this feeling that his master needed him. Nadroj ran into the main cabin. "Yes Master?You needed me."
  17. Jordan

    Space

    "Ithor!! Thats were my best friend is from!! I have been there before. My father died there. That place will be great to traine in!"
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    Space

    Nadroj followed her to the cockpit. "So were are we going master?"
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    Space

    Nadroj ran into the main cabin. "Hey! So, at the temple I never realy got to know you. Or you know me. Well I will start, Im Nadroj Ehtylb. I was born on Naboo. My Dad tried to kill me when I was four and my mom died in a lightsaber dule with a sith. Shortly after that my dad joined the sith and I went to the jedi for help, and here I am now, A jedi apprentice! What about you. Were did you come from. Oh and can I have some of that sandwich?"
  20. "Okay, we shall leave now. I do not want to lose time."
  21. "Wow! I mean nothing would honor me more, Master Jedi." Nadroj stared at her for what seemed to be forever. He just could not beleve that someone finaly asked him to be their padawan learner. He just hopes that this master will endup better then his last master, Master Etch Lo'Notch.
  22. Stands up and blushes slightly. "Im terribly sorry master jedi." Reaches and takes her hand. "Im Nadroj Ehtylb. You can call me Jordan. You wouldent be looking for an apprentice. Would you?"
  23. Jordan's ship exits hyperspace above the planet of Tempay and slowly descends to the surface. Exiting the ship, he looks around and checks out the area. Once he built up enough nerve, he headed into the academy, and waited to be noticed.
  24. (Enters Dojo) "Is this were you can train to learn the wisdom of the Jedi, If so I am ready."
  25. CHARACTER SHEET Real Name: Nadroj Ehtylb Nickname: Nadroj Ehtylb Age: 13 Species: Human Height: 5'6 Weight: 120 Hair: Red Eyes: Hazle Sex: Male Homeworld: Naboo Alignment:Good Clothing:Brown Robes Weapon: A Vibro-Sword Force User Inventory: (1000 credits, A comlink, a picture of his father. Posessions: A very old Jedi Starfighter that he found when blowing out the side of a hill on his dads property, Master:
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