Minus One

I'm supposed to be working on Parallels 2 right now, but my inspiration has been drawn to something else. This is called In My Arms. Remembering days long past When you were in my arms A smile crept across my face But now that smile's gone A touch that was so comforting Your eyes so full of charm I would do just anything To be back in your arms You bring brightness to my day Despite a world of black Don't know why I let you fade I know I want you back Wondering why you aren't here A hurt that I can't take I just want to hear you say Listen, it's not too late Crappy quality with vocals (video) Good quality with bass line and no vocals

Well, the ghost is a white man. In fact, everyone on this site has heard of him.

Title: Ghost of the Force Rating: PG Rated for: Mild use of explicit language, fantasy violence Critique level: Encouraged I'm not far enough in to post a chapter, but I do have a teaser. Readers of my previous works should enjoy this. This will be posted sometime this summer. Voice-Over: The galaxy has reached a new age... Lorus: The peoples of this Republic have enjoyed a peace never known in the time of the Jedi Knights. VO: An age of freedom... Lorus: Never again will our sons and daughters be stolen from us to fight wars of the Force! Today is the day we remember those lost, and honor the downfall of ALL Force Users. Not just Jedi and Sith... VO: An age coming to an end... Lorus grasped at his throat and floated in the air before asphyxiating to death. VO: I have returned from the netherworld to haunt your dreams, as mine once were... Reporter: Prime Minister Lorus Balthier was killed during his yearly Remembrance Day speech, seemingly by the whim of the Force. VO: I can grant you powers unlimited... An orange lightsaber deflected blaster fire into the crowd. VO: The Force will never be extinguished from the mortal world. A cloaked figure slowly raised his hands, crumbling skyscrapers ”œThe limitless power of the Force... answerable only to me.”

Up next is a concept album I'm working on. Existence starts out as nothingness, called the Infinite. The Infinite inexplicably fractures into three: the light (Amaron), the darkness, (Zaros), and consciousness, giving everything in existence awareness. Zaros can't see without his brother's help and becomes angered by his dependence. He wishes to rather not exist at all, and wants to re-unite the Infinite. Amaron wishes to continue to exist and transforms himself into the realms and creates the Weave; an armor to protect himself. The humans of these worlds are effected by consciousness as well and soon divide into two factions: evil (those who want the destruction of the worlds and the reunion of the Infinite) and good (protectors of the realm and followers of Amaron) The Infinite Stumbling in darkness Brother can see Crawling in circles No light for me Infinite fracture Void is in three Jealousy raging Time isn't free Fracture giveth life Brother's cries go unheard I am the Great Divide Brother of darkness One born to light And one to reason, Make the two fight I am the Great Divide Spiderweb glass Shatter, shatter. I break to pieces Faster, faster. Dominoes falling Forever collapsing Darkness is biting Wake from my sleep The worlds and the stars Weave protecting Infinite fracture Lands and the seas Glorious rapture All that I breathe Gods walking backwards The Weave ever spans No thought of hardship No need to feel bad The son of our makers We're all that's left We are the takers Of our masters' hands Disciples of the Fracture We are the knights of peace, guardians of the free There will be no reunion People give us grief, dangers they can't see Protect the heart of Amaron The Infinite has died Our god has had his time Disciples of the Fracture We will not divide Our own are out of line, it must be a sign There will be no reunion We're a dying kind, shatter space and time We have made the decision Believe in what we say, blind trust in The Way There will be no reunion Crisis of your faith, the danger is away Can't undo what has been done. You can listen to a demo of the second song here: http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/zerodiablos/music/all/play627466

An update!? I have to re-read a bit so I remember what's going on, then I'll critique!

No, my pick slipped out of my hand and flew into the opening on my guitar. And yes.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ces-6O5hzO0 My pick flies into the guitar at the end so it's cut off a little. I've posted a ton of lyrics before, but now you guys can actually hear a song I've wrote. Be warned though: I can't sing.

I just got done recording a demo of the music I wrote to go along with this. Audacity, however, decided it wasn't gonna pick up my lows and I had to up the bass to compensate. http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/zerodiablos/ I think I mess up the F a couple times...

Thanks Ami I had 'inspiration'. I wrote an acoustic bit for it, but my guitarist read it too and said he had riffs immediately, so I haven't recorded anything. If you'd like to hear my guitar stuff, check out the website link on my profile.

Living on clouds, my head's in the sky Feeling myself, slipping too high Wanting to laugh or wanting to cry Wanting to run and wanting to smile Trying to think, my thoughts turn to fog Trying my best, to express in a song Something with feeling, something that's real Trying to best, the feelings I feel Something feels wrong... but something feels right Some days I can't seem to sleep through the night I wonder all hours, ”œShould I get in the race?”

Chapter 16 ”œThe blast will destroy this city and the ring. Not a very original plan, but we know it'll work.”

I thought it was great.

Chapter 15 ”œMy Lord, your superluminal drive has been completed.”

Heh, I got the strangest urge for a James Bond reference. I've done blatant Highlander references before.

Well, Master Chief never was too big on talking. Korbin/Bellicose acted so early because of a yet-to-be-named disturbance in the Force.