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  1. [accent=scottish]Why thankye kind sir.[/accent]
  2. Another poem: Seems to pass you by, Controls your life, Tells you things you wanted to know, You try to tell it to other people, You watch it throughout your day, It is time.
  3. A mixed breed dog is spelled mutt. When I read Mut, I read it as Mute, it sounds cooler than Mutt. If it was in Expanded Universe, I would of taken it as fact, very good job in the over all idea.
  4. Sorry, it's my first fanfic thing, so I was afraid I was bad at writing, I just spent sometime on it no one said anything, I wanted to cry! Ya, I love myself, too, but I don't love my life, it stinks.
  5. Ok, plz give me constructive criticizm plz, but be nice in how you do it. (no title, rough draft) To love life is to give life no meaning, There's no drive, no want and no need for more, There's no point, but to live, No desire for the everpresent change, Just live life the same as the day before today and the day before yesterday, To hate life is to give life a meaning, There's a drive, a want and a need for more, There's a point, a desire for change, Maybe one day I will want to live this life, But today, I want to live a different life, One with no pain or worry, One where needs are met, No one to have to count on, No want to o wrong, But no wrong that could be done, I just want to live a different life.
  6. ((decided to do something else, delete this))
  7. Well, ok, but my poetry doesn't ryhme or is "lovely". It's...it's...strange even for poetry. So, in essence, it's bad poetry.
  8. m80493

    Haruun Kal

    Sam looked at the guard. He didn't look very smart, as if his only job could only ever be guarding something. His eyes, wow, it's been a long time since he'd seen green eyes like that, pure emerald eyes. He stared for a moment, until he realized to his embarrassment he was staring him down. Sam answered him, "I hope so, I'm new, my name is Sam Salud, check if anyone is exspecting me. I'd appreciate it." "Oh, Sam Salud. Your help is no longer needed, sorry for the inconvience." "It's ok." Sam Salud flew away in the Optica. ((It's ok, Ryan, you didn't waste my time.))
  9. m80493

    Haruun Kal

    A giant flying eyeball came out of the sky and landed. An old man was near it and his facial expression could only be described with the phrase, "Like, what the fuk?!" The loading shaft came down, Samuel Salud came out of the Optica.
  10. Name: Samuel Salud Nickname: Sam Species: Human Sex: male Eye Color: Blue Hair: blond and faux hawk Age: 32 Height: 6'3”
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