Ok, plz give me constructive criticizm plz, but be nice in how you do it.
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To love life is to give life no meaning,
There's no drive, no want and no need for more,
There's no point, but to live,
No desire for the everpresent change,
Just live life the same as the day before today and the day before yesterday,
To hate life is to give life a meaning,
There's a drive, a want and a need for more,
There's a point, a desire for change,
Maybe one day I will want to live this life,
But today, I want to live a different life,
One with no pain or worry,
One where needs are met,
No one to have to count on,
No want to o wrong,
But no wrong that could be done,
I just want to live a different life.