Galadriel Kenobi

I thought I'd briefly de-lurk once again to tell you that I'm really enjoying where you're taking this story. Especially Anakin's new insight into Obi-Wan. I do wish you hadn't killed Qui-Gon off, but it worked very well for the story. More, please?

I'm lurking. I really enjoy time-travel fics, but my schedule is pretty tight and extensive reviews are not my strong suit and "Great job! Please update!" seems a bit... inadequate. I can say that this is probably the best time-travel story I've seen where Anakin does the traveling. I think you've done an excellent job of balancing his inner struggle with what's going on around him! I'm looking forward to reading more!

The Dream By Galadriel Kenobi This is a response to Tiana's September challenge to ”œWrite a story less than 3000 words long in first person.”

Cool. I never actually thought about it from the tauntaun's point of view. Great story!

Thanks! I wrote the first draft from memory, watched the corresponding sections of the movie to check for accuracy, then edited the fic.

A Padawan's Trials By Galadriel Kenobi This is a response to Tiana's September challenge to ”œwrite a story in which a main character from any commonly known series is killed. (Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter, etc...) Sorry it took me so long to get it up here. Disclaimer: Star Wars is not mine. It never will be. I am making no money off of this fanfiction and no copyright infringement is intended. * * * * * * * * * * * * * ”œI will train him.”

Vengeful Reflections By Galadriel Kenobi A response to the challenge: Begin, end or contain within a short/long story the following line. "I watched my reflection walk by in the window." Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars. I am not making any money off of this fanfiction, and no copyright infringement is intended. * * * * * * * * * * * * * I watched my reflection walk by in the window. My appearance was still unfamiliar, and I was startled when I saw it. The black helmet that would strike fear into the galaxy's inhabitants was as alien to me as the deep sinister voice that accompanied it. I called on the Dark Side of the Force. It came in powerful waves, strengthening me, filling me with energy, yet it did not come as strongly as before. The metal frame and wire circuits of my replaced limbs had reduced the potency of the Force for me; diminishing my power. Rage flowed through me, increasing the sense of power, though only briefly. Kenobi had done this to me, taking away from me everything that I had. He had escaped for now, hiding like the coward he was, but he could not evade me forever. One day I would find him... and then he would pay.

I like it. Very well written, and an interesting storyline. I'm curious about the young woman with the clipboard. Who is she and what is her role, other than to inform the other characters about what is happening? I look forward to reading more.

Interesting. Are we going to find out what was sabotaged, or is that irrelevant? Would it be correct to assume that Obi-Wan is about to be transported into the alternate universe? "If the Jedi Order is ever destroyed, Obi-Wan reasoned, I'll be perfectly qualified for a career in the circus." This was my favorite line!

This brings new meaning to the phrase ”œshort story.”

Intriguing. I like your descriptions, and you've definitely drawn me in. I'm eager to see what comes next!

Interesting. A very exciting and suspenseful story. I have to admit that I found it a bit confusing, but that could be because I'm half-asleep at the moment. I look forward to more.

Nice posts! Sorry it's taken me so long to give you any feedback. Is the nightmare a foreshadowing, or just the result of fears and an active imagination? I like the fact that you're delving into Mirmo's past. He's an interesting character.

You've got more up already? I'm still working on the seven fics prompted by the last set! At this rate I'll never catch up! Just kidding. I've got four more ideas. Unfortunately, two of them are full-length fics, which I probably won't have time to write. I'll try, though. Nice challenges.

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this story! I really enjoy your descriptions of her internal struggles, as well as being curious about this new padawan. In this last post, when you were describing her using the wooden lightsaber, there were a couple times when I had difficulty envisioning what moves you were trying to depict, but overall, you did a great job.

Yay! You gave us more! Interesting descriptions of the handmaidens. Also, that little insight about Padme's journal is wiggling around in my brain. I can't help but wonder if the journal is going to end up in the wrong hands... As always, I love the way you write and can't wait for more.

I liked it. However, like Ami, I really didn't understand most of it. I thought I had it figured out until you mentioned the file, and that sort of threw me off. :shrug: It could be the way I read. I agree with Skye that your use of emotion is very good, and I also look forward to seeing more fics by you.

Nice. My knowledge of the Vong is limited to what I've gleaned through fanfiction, since the only NJO book I've read has nothing to do with them, but I enjoyed this fic nonetheless. It is a very imaginitive way to use the challenge. (When I read the challenge, I was racking my brain to think of something I could write about where the sun really didn't rise again. I'm still working on it. ) Good job.

Thank you again to Tiana for betaing! Chapter 2 ”œPay attention, Initiate Kinas!”

Hmmm... I might have a couple ideas for numbers two and four. I'm not sure if they'll work out, though. I'll have get to work on them right away.

Wow, it's here! I really like what you've got so far, though it may take me a while to get used to the idea of Qui-Gon as a Sith. I am very impressed by your cover. How did you do that? (I am the kind of person who can barely use Microsoft Paint, which can be rather frustrating at times. ) You seem to have an extra letter near the end of the second post. I assume that you meant to say, Hey, who called it? as opposed to vHey, who called it? Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed it, and am looking forward to more!

The challenge was ”” Write a vignette that begins with the sentence: "This was the end. He wasn't sure what precisely brought him to that conclusion, but he knew it was true." Limited to 2,000 words. Here's what I came up with. The Final Conflict By: Galadriel Kenobi Disclaimer: The setting, characters, etc. do not belong to me. No profit is being made from this work of fan fiction. No copyright infringement intended. This was the end. He wasn't sure what precisely brought him to that conclusion, but he knew it was true. The moment his son had spoken those heart-wrenching words, he had known that this would be his final conflict. ”œThen my father is truly dead,”

In dreams we enter a strange world. A world filled with forgotten hopes and hidden perils, a place where nothing is as it seems, and the "good guys" don't always win. It is a place where our darker nature is revealed to us, a nature we aren't always ready to accept. This place is the forgotten world. Forsaken by the gods we have lost many of our morals in order to survive. And now, in order to survive, we must forsake more. We must forsake that which we hold most dear in order to wake from our dreams. What we forsake will never return, we must choose carefully. To live in sin or to die in hope, what a terrible place waits for us when the fantasy ceases to be; what horrible things we do when dreams can only breath in slumber. There are only seven of us left now and our sole objective is to survive the winter. "Which did you like better, Empire or Return of the Jedi?" Once I recoiled from the sheer stupidity of the question, I gathered myself and replied, "Empire, I'd rather have a dysentaric yak crap in my eye sockets than believe that a universal super power could be taken down by muppets." Said Ezekiel, while he huddled for warmth, waiting for my inevitable defense of Return. "But Return is the ultimate conclusion of the series and reunion of the characters; surely for the sheer value of its happy ending, it must be the better movie," comes the anticipated parry. "Yes, but what of the sheer idiocy of the 'Yub-Yub' song?" chimed a third party. It took me a moment to take in the other's responses before I quickly added, "It may be the summation of the series, but when that summation includes the death star being blown up not by the main character but instead by a space pimp and a chemically altered monkey, it still makes for a totally crap movie." "Leia has a bikini, that obviously fixes it all, now go start the damn fire!" Ezekiel sighed, as it was his turn to tend the fire, he put another log into the 'furnace' and suggested "Where does a New Hope come in then?" Willam stood up to state his opinion, with a sly smark, "I'll tell you where A New Hope comes in at: it comes in at IT'S BLOODY COLD!" Everyone mumbled an agreement at the last statement, and Ezekiel quickly stoked the fire while everyone gathered around. But as everyone gathered close to the warmth, no one noticed in the swirling snow beyond them: a pair of glowing red eyes. Suddenly the swirling snow began to take shape, rising up to form a snowman with glowing red eyes and a charcoal frown. The banter continued, obvlious to the present danger lurking just beyond the group. After Ezekiel tended to the fire and responded, "Doesn't being in the cold remind you of the Hoth Scene with that scary Yeti thing?" "It's a wampa...get it right," Phillip sighed. "Wampa, scary yeti thing... what's the difference? They both eat meat..." Edward retorted. Then, when no one expected, the snow man attacked. One of the fire-mongers, thinking fast, pulled a piece of wood out of the fire, and said, "If you want to kill us, you'll have to get past this fire!" He swung around the flaming stick with a furious, deadly expression leaping onto his face. The snow man paused, as this obviously presented a melting dilemna. The snowman desperately needed some friends to help him get through this most difficult trial. Then, at his most desperate moment, three more snowmen burst through the door and were like "RAWR" and he was like "RAWR"; they were totally in sync The only problem was that they were in sync, not backstreet boys. "Oh my god; it's N*SynC!" Yelled Kory as he curled up in fear. How N*Sync had suddenly turned into snowmen was beyond any of the people present, however, Marie knew that it was time to take things into a woman's hands. Kory soon stood up as Marie prepared herself and he grabbed a flaming stick, throwing at a snow man and melting half it's head and shattering a window of the cabin "F***!" Then Kory said to Marie, "Woman, stand aside, this is a man's job!" As Kory and Marie argued, the seventh member of the group stood up from where he had been crouching near the fire and let out a roar worthy of a wookiee, a burning torch in each hand.

Chapter 1 ”œReverting to realspace in thirty seconds,”

Chapter 1 will be up tomorrow or the next day. Wow! It really made my day when I read that. Thanks! NavyGal - Glad you enjoyed it! Yoda is one of my favorite characters.