Galadriel Kenobi

I thought I'd briefly de-lurk once again to tell you that I'm really enjoying where you're taking this story. Especially Anakin's new insight into Obi-Wan. I do wish you hadn't killed Qui-Gon off, but it worked very well for the story. More, please?

I'm lurking. I really enjoy time-travel fics, but my schedule is pretty tight and extensive reviews are not my strong suit and "Great job! Please update!" seems a bit... inadequate. I can say that this is probably the best time-travel story I've seen where Anakin does the traveling. I think you've done an excellent job of balancing his inner struggle with what's going on around him! I'm looking forward to reading more!

The Dream By Galadriel Kenobi This is a response to Tiana's September challenge to ”œWrite a story less than 3000 words long in first person.”

Cool. I never actually thought about it from the tauntaun's point of view. Great story!

Thanks! I wrote the first draft from memory, watched the corresponding sections of the movie to check for accuracy, then edited the fic.

A Padawan's Trials By Galadriel Kenobi This is a response to Tiana's September challenge to ”œwrite a story in which a main character from any commonly known series is killed. (Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter, etc...) Sorry it took me so long to get it up here. Disclaimer: Star Wars is not mine. It never will be. I am making no money off of this fanfiction and no copyright infringement is intended. * * * * * * * * * * * * * ”œI will train him.”

Vengeful Reflections By Galadriel Kenobi A response to the challenge: Begin, end or contain within a short/long story the following line. "I watched my reflection walk by in the window." Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars. I am not making any money off of this fanfiction, and no copyright infringement is intended. * * * * * * * * * * * * * I watched my reflection walk by in the window. My appearance was still unfamiliar, and I was startled when I saw it. The black helmet that would strike fear into the galaxy's inhabitants was as alien to me as the deep sinister voice that accompanied it. I called on the Dark Side of the Force. It came in powerful waves, strengthening me, filling me with energy, yet it did not come as strongly as before. The metal frame and wire circuits of my replaced limbs had reduced the potency of the Force for me; diminishing my power. Rage flowed through me, increasing the sense of power, though only briefly. Kenobi had done this to me, taking away from me everything that I had. He had escaped for now, hiding like the coward he was, but he could not evade me forever. One day I would find him... and then he would pay.

I like it. Very well written, and an interesting storyline. I'm curious about the young woman with the clipboard. Who is she and what is her role, other than to inform the other characters about what is happening? I look forward to reading more.

Interesting. Are we going to find out what was sabotaged, or is that irrelevant? Would it be correct to assume that Obi-Wan is about to be transported into the alternate universe? "If the Jedi Order is ever destroyed, Obi-Wan reasoned, I'll be perfectly qualified for a career in the circus." This was my favorite line!

This brings new meaning to the phrase ”œshort story.”

Intriguing. I like your descriptions, and you've definitely drawn me in. I'm eager to see what comes next!

Interesting. A very exciting and suspenseful story. I have to admit that I found it a bit confusing, but that could be because I'm half-asleep at the moment. I look forward to more.

Nice posts! Sorry it's taken me so long to give you any feedback. Is the nightmare a foreshadowing, or just the result of fears and an active imagination? I like the fact that you're delving into Mirmo's past. He's an interesting character.

You've got more up already? I'm still working on the seven fics prompted by the last set! At this rate I'll never catch up! Just kidding. I've got four more ideas. Unfortunately, two of them are full-length fics, which I probably won't have time to write. I'll try, though. Nice challenges.

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this story! I really enjoy your descriptions of her internal struggles, as well as being curious about this new padawan. In this last post, when you were describing her using the wooden lightsaber, there were a couple times when I had difficulty envisioning what moves you were trying to depict, but overall, you did a great job.